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23rd October 2005, 12:29 AM
This is a Fanfic topic, not an RPG. Read and comment.
This Fanfic is based in the far future of the series 'Redwall' which many of the younger RWP members may be familiar with.
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Chapter 1
A lone figure was seen in space, he was repairing a orbiting space station. But he was not quite what was expected, A mouse! He was in a strange suit that had large wings on the back of it. The suit moved about him as if it were an organic form. He opened his comm. device and spoke into it.
"Redwall Command Center, I've found the problem."
The voice of a badger came back over the comm. device. The badger was male and seemed to have a commanding presence to his voice.
"Go ahead Mian, what is wrong"
Mian pushed the transmit button with his paw and spoke to the badger
"I got a bad thruster on gravity simulator 1. We can't get gravity back until it is fixed." Mian told them.
A reply was voiced quickly to Mian.
"We'll send out a shuttle to fix it, you'd best get inside. You are needed back down here."
The mouse got inside the station as repairs were made. There was a shudder and Mian fell to the floor on his back.
"Owww!" Mian lamented as he hit the floor. "ya could have given me a warnin down there!"
The voice of the badger came across the speaker again.
"You know the bots don't alert us when they are about to finish Mian. They just give a finished signal"
"Well you could upgrade them if ya wanted to." Mian said as he rubbed his back a bit.
"Yes, Take the bullet back down here, you are needed at Redwall city immediately. The abbess did not give a reason. I am transferring tracking of the bullet to them. Salamandastron space control center over and out!" The badger lord of Salamandastron said as his signal went off.
He boosted himself lightly into a bullet shaped mythril pod with a single thruster in the back, the door closed and the heat barrier activated. A computer voice began a countdown.
"3... 2... 1... Dive!!!!!" The computer voice droned.
The mouse flew out of the space station on his long journey back to Merth, planet of Redwall.
His pod quickly sped up to terminal velocity as the outer shell stripped off. The thruster was soon to follow in breaking off.
"Heat shields deactivated, you are in free fall Mian. We expect you to land at the mouth of the River Moss" A female hare said across the comm. device as the last of the bullet broke off of the form of Mian.
He reached 10000 feet, the bullet shielding broke away as he fell in his divesuit to the ground. The wings on the divesuit opened quickly to act as a parachute.
"This should be good." Mian Chuckled.
His comm. device beeped. The voice of the hare came over it, she sounded a bit frantic
"You trajectory does not put you at the river Moss.... Mian!! Don't tell me you took the board with you!" The female hare yelled.
He pulled a snowboard out from behind him and strapped it to both footpaws. The trajectory immediately changed to more diagonal as he glided down using the board.
"Don't lose your head darlin'. I know what I'm doin!!"
Mian's descent rapidly slowed. He battled to get upright as he neared the ground. The wind was driving and the forces of physics were constantly battling him.
"Coming in for landing HQ"
He came in at a slant... channeling all the forces of the fall into forwards energy. He skidded across the water coming to a stop just where control predicted, the mouth of the river Moss.
"That was a nice run"
He got into the waiting Transport to HQ, the transport sped off down the main coastal highway at about 80 Mph. Chesha, the Hare abbess of Redwall, approached Mian and spoke to him.
"Mian, I don't want you doing that again... it is far to dangerous. You nearly scared the trainee who was running the tracking post to death." she said.
"You know I always love to make an entrance darlin'" Mian said playfully
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Next Chapter later on.
This Fanfic is based in the far future of the series 'Redwall' which many of the younger RWP members may be familiar with.
------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 1
A lone figure was seen in space, he was repairing a orbiting space station. But he was not quite what was expected, A mouse! He was in a strange suit that had large wings on the back of it. The suit moved about him as if it were an organic form. He opened his comm. device and spoke into it.
"Redwall Command Center, I've found the problem."
The voice of a badger came back over the comm. device. The badger was male and seemed to have a commanding presence to his voice.
"Go ahead Mian, what is wrong"
Mian pushed the transmit button with his paw and spoke to the badger
"I got a bad thruster on gravity simulator 1. We can't get gravity back until it is fixed." Mian told them.
A reply was voiced quickly to Mian.
"We'll send out a shuttle to fix it, you'd best get inside. You are needed back down here."
The mouse got inside the station as repairs were made. There was a shudder and Mian fell to the floor on his back.
"Owww!" Mian lamented as he hit the floor. "ya could have given me a warnin down there!"
The voice of the badger came across the speaker again.
"You know the bots don't alert us when they are about to finish Mian. They just give a finished signal"
"Well you could upgrade them if ya wanted to." Mian said as he rubbed his back a bit.
"Yes, Take the bullet back down here, you are needed at Redwall city immediately. The abbess did not give a reason. I am transferring tracking of the bullet to them. Salamandastron space control center over and out!" The badger lord of Salamandastron said as his signal went off.
He boosted himself lightly into a bullet shaped mythril pod with a single thruster in the back, the door closed and the heat barrier activated. A computer voice began a countdown.
"3... 2... 1... Dive!!!!!" The computer voice droned.
The mouse flew out of the space station on his long journey back to Merth, planet of Redwall.
His pod quickly sped up to terminal velocity as the outer shell stripped off. The thruster was soon to follow in breaking off.
"Heat shields deactivated, you are in free fall Mian. We expect you to land at the mouth of the River Moss" A female hare said across the comm. device as the last of the bullet broke off of the form of Mian.
He reached 10000 feet, the bullet shielding broke away as he fell in his divesuit to the ground. The wings on the divesuit opened quickly to act as a parachute.
"This should be good." Mian Chuckled.
His comm. device beeped. The voice of the hare came over it, she sounded a bit frantic
"You trajectory does not put you at the river Moss.... Mian!! Don't tell me you took the board with you!" The female hare yelled.
He pulled a snowboard out from behind him and strapped it to both footpaws. The trajectory immediately changed to more diagonal as he glided down using the board.
"Don't lose your head darlin'. I know what I'm doin!!"
Mian's descent rapidly slowed. He battled to get upright as he neared the ground. The wind was driving and the forces of physics were constantly battling him.
"Coming in for landing HQ"
He came in at a slant... channeling all the forces of the fall into forwards energy. He skidded across the water coming to a stop just where control predicted, the mouth of the river Moss.
"That was a nice run"
He got into the waiting Transport to HQ, the transport sped off down the main coastal highway at about 80 Mph. Chesha, the Hare abbess of Redwall, approached Mian and spoke to him.
"Mian, I don't want you doing that again... it is far to dangerous. You nearly scared the trainee who was running the tracking post to death." she said.
"You know I always love to make an entrance darlin'" Mian said playfully
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Next Chapter later on.