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22nd June 2006, 05:49 AM
Well I'm sorry everybody that you had to wait so long. I bet you were all saying "I wish pinkbull would make a fan-fic it would be so awsome." Well you probably didn't but here you go.
Chapter 1: The beginning of the end
The date is January 27th 2009. Rare Witch Project Forums traffic has slowed down to a snails pace in the last 3 years. But Slaphappy has still been hard at work hacking at Banjo Kazooie and has just found half of some data stored in Banjo Kazooie never known of before.
He has also found the Gameshark code to Stop 'n' Swap. He posted his results and many posts have been made about the amazing discovery.
Febuary 3rd 2009. Hundreds of sites and their forums have posted the discovery of Stop 'n' Swap. Slaphappy is now a god among the community and is worshiped by many. Thousands have now activated and used stop 'n' swap, not knowing what is actully going on in the other 1/4th of hidden memory.
In the days that followed stange supernatural things have been happening across the world and with people's N64's. They have been strange internal changes that nobody has noticed...yet. This is the beginning of Rare's ultimate plan. The beginning... Of the end.
I will post Chapter 2 tomarrow. This is more of an intro to Rare's last laugh. It will make more sense tomarrow when I post part 2. This will be a darker yet exiting story with plenty of references to members here in the forums. If you see your name and don't want it in there I will replace it with somthing more genaric. Remember it's just a story. Hopefully a good one.
22nd June 2006, 05:06 PM
Cool...looks like this wil be interesting...sure! I'll follow this one! :)
22nd June 2006, 05:28 PM
And In this amazing chapter one of the plots questions get answered but even more arise.
Chapter 2: The Mourned Have Risen
I woke up in the morning to see the sun hasn't risin yet. I look at my clock and see that it's eleven. I got out of bed to see what is going on in more detail. In my paranioa I grab the plank of wood with 10 nails through the end as a weapon. (And yes I actully have that).
I go outside and see that half the sky is becoming blood red. This was really strange so I went to investigate it more. Then I went back inside and turned on the TV. I watch the news and see that the whole concentration of the clouds were in England. In the center was Rare.
I went to my computer and checked out all the news sites and nothing came up. I tried every possible site until I tried Rare. Their site was up but it was just a blue screen.
Then I thought somthing was wierd about this so I went downstairs and booted up the N64 to see if anything wierd was going on with the Rare games.
Goldeneye was ok. Blast Corps still sucked. But then I tried Banjo Tooie. As soon as I activated Stop 'n' Swap a zombie smashed through the window and lept at me. I'm my terror I picked up my plank and smashed the zombie right in the head. As it was dieing it muttered "you can't...stop Rare." and with that it turned to dust. In my shock I called up P.o.t.O and he told me the same thing happened to him exept he had a shotgun.
"Hey do you have any idea what those zombies were from?"
"I think it might've been Rare. Mabe Stop 'n' Swap was just a plan to unlock the Doom of our planet."
"I was just about to say the same thing."
"No you weren't."
"I think we should get some more people to help us find out what's going on since the internet is back up."
"Hmmmm. Did you notice the zombies how the discintegrated like a vampire yet were very cliché. It does seem like somthing Rare would do."
And so with that they both logged onto Rare Witch project IM. Almost all the members are on and are talking about the zombies and how they muttered you can't stop Rare.
After sorting through the junk from the others Pinkbull, P.o.t.O, Ice Mario, dmoss and thatguyoverthere decide to meet at Applebee's in St. Paul to further discuss this.
Chapter 3 is coming later tonight or tomarrow.
22nd June 2006, 06:20 PM
Let's hear it for Applebee's! This is somewhat strange, yet you still have my attention, pb...:)
22nd June 2006, 07:45 PM
Not bad! Not bad at all! :) If I'm in it, I wanna be a zombie slayer.
22nd June 2006, 08:34 PM
Oh and if you want to be in it. Post it here or PM me. I want everybody to get a chance to be in it if they want. I might be watching blade trenity tonight so that may affect the story. Lets just say that there will be some great fight scenes planned.
23rd June 2006, 05:11 AM
I wanna be some guy who has a robotic arm!:p
23rd June 2006, 02:55 PM
I'll be in it. It sounds very interesting.
I'm going to be a half human half dark ice dragon.
My attacks are using an ice sword, and dragon powers.
Good job, Mr Pinkbull.
25th June 2006, 03:30 AM
Chapter 3: Eatin' good in the neihborhood
Everybody arrived at Applebees with shotguns and magnums. Zombies were everywhere and they were all attacking the party. Pinkbull bashed his way through the zombies with his plank.
"Hey why does everyone else get a gun?"
"Because you don't." Ice mario said.
"Hey!" And with that Pinkbull swung the plank at Ice Mario and knocked him out and the zombies took him off into the shadows. After watchig for a second Pinkbull took the shot gun and the shotgun shells laying on the ground.
"Allright then lets go inside!"
"But what about Ice Mario you killed hi..."
"Knocked him out. I knocked him out. The zombies killed him"
"Oh. Well then let's go insi-oh my god!" Zombies came from the shadows and bit Thatguyoverthere in the neck. As soon as this happened P.o.t.O lept into action with the SPAM reaver and slashed right at the zombie. He cuts it clean and half and then almost from nowhere 50 more come out.
"We Might need backup." Pinkbull said.
"Well then let's kill twice as hard." P.o.t.O said before he jumped into the crowd of zombies to take them out one by one with the reaver. Pinkbull stares at his gun, then the zombies and drops it and picks up the plank and slams each zombie in the head. Dmoss runs in with dual magnums firing at the zombies. The kill off about 30 of the zombies and about 100 more emerged from the shadows.
"Oh for gods sake!"
"I don't think we can kill them all..."
"Well then dmoss what do you have in mind?"
"Actully I think we..." And with that a mysterious figure comes and all the zombies run to the shadows and disappear."
"I don't know but he scared off the zombies so he should be a good guy."
The dark figure raised a long blade into the air that glimmered in the moonlight. Then it said to the onlooking party, " Make no mistake for I am no enemy."
"I'm much worse!"
"Well that's not good."
"Feel the wrath of the the greatest warrior of Rare. Shadowman!"
25th June 2006, 03:37 AM
We are all looking forward to Chapter 4.
Good luck on finsihing this.
25th June 2006, 05:26 PM
Thanks everyone. You should've seen the original draft for chapter 3. It was almost all pointless speech and very boring but my computer froze so I started all over with the good version. All the old one had was dialogue that got nowhere. Expect Chapter 4 a few hours from now or tonight.
26th June 2006, 02:18 AM
I'm hoping to make it 20 chapters long for Part 1. If I do make a part 2 it will be a sequal, Not a continuation.
Chapter 4: The Weapon Dealer
Shadowman lept into battle. He ran at the party of 3 with his blade in the air and swung it at P.o.t.O. P.o.t.O summoned his SPAM reaver on Perried the blow and jumped to Shadowman's side. Shadowman ducked from P.o.t.O's oncoming blow and knocked him out with a jab to the face. P.o.t.O fell to the ground, unconsious.
Before Shadowman could see what was going on Pinkbull swung his plank at Shadowman. Before Pinkbull could hit Shadowman he dispapeared into a plume of smoke.
"Dmoss keep an eye on P.o.t.O. Make sure he didn't break anything." P.o.t.O was on the ground recovering from the blow.
"I've got a grudge with this guy." And with those words said Pinkbull walked off into the darkness.
Pinkbull kept on walking until he approached a run down apartment complex. He went to the entrance and knocked on the door.
"Kablamooie it's me." Kablamooie opened the door and let Pinkbull inside.
"I need guns. I need a good one. Somthing that could kill a zombie. I ran into Shadowman and he's alot worse."
"Wait zombies?! What's going on Pink? I thought you made sure that this wouldn't happen. Pink what happened I haven't seen a sunrise and it's 3 PM."
"They found Stop 'n' Swap. Too many people used Stop 'n' Swap and activated the code. Then Rare's plan started. Don't worry it's just zombies so far but the living that are left will probably git bitten.
"Bitten...Bitten by what? Oh god you don't mean?"
"Yes I do."
"Then take this." Kablamooie takes out a paintball gun and hands it to Pinkbull.
"A paintball gun?"
"A paintball gun with holy water filled paintball's. This could kill a vampire in 5 seconds."
"Thanks but what about the..."
"Here you go. 44. Magnum with Silver shells."
"Thanks Kablamooie. Oh crap P.o.t.O and Dmoss!" And Pinkbull ran out of the apartment to P.o.t.O and Dmoss with the paintballgun.
"You welcome! Geez."
Pinkbull ran back to Applebees where only P.o.t.O remained.
"P.o.t.O what happened?!" P.o.t.O raised a trembleing finger to the shadows. Pinkbull only managed to see Dmoss dragged into the shadows.
"Dmoss!" Pinkbull yelled as he started shooting into the darkness. He managed to shoot the vampire and it fell to the ground and disintegrated into dust.
Dmoss was nowhere to to be found. Pinkbull searched franticly with no avail.
"Crap they took Dmoss. We might be found later but don't expect to see a human another than me for a long time."
"Where's Shadow man?"
"I don't know. Just rest for a few hours then we'll go."
"You'll see...You'll see." And with that Pinkbull sat guard until P.o.t.O was ready to go.
26th June 2006, 02:25 AM
Awesome!!! I'm a weapon dealer? ROCK ON!!!!!!!!
27th June 2006, 12:33 AM
That's a funny story PinkBull. :) By the way,could you not use my name in your story? Thanks.
27th June 2006, 02:02 AM
Oh, noes! I was dragged into the shadows! I do hope I make it out okay...! :p
This keeps getting more and more interesting, PB...!
27th June 2006, 05:00 AM
Thank you all for your support. All I can give you in return is This (http://www.amishdonkey.com/funny-picture-of-the-day.php?d=06-16-2006)
Chapter 5: Revenge
"P.o.t.O you ready?" P.o.t.O nodded and showed pain as he got up from the cold pavement.
"Allright were going to find answers so were going to take the road until we can get a ride." And with that the two started walking down the road trying to get a ride.
They kept walking until they heard some rustling in the bushes. They stopped with their weapons read to strike. They heard some talking in an unidentifiable language. The wispering went on until they felt the cold wind against their backs. Pinkbull swung around and managed to catch a figure just excape his eye.
"Look out!" Pinkbull said and as soon as they ducked a assassin fly over them with a dagger that just missed P.o.t.O.
"Hahahahahahaha ha. You might as well give up now! You can't beat me. I could be right infront of you and you wouldn't even know it." As soon as he said that Pinkbull pulled out his magnum and shot at the head of the mysterious foe.
"Hahaha. So now your using guns alright then I'll have to fix that." The assassin lunged tward Pinkbull and as soon as he ducked the assassin took the magnum and crumpled it up into a ball.
"You see Pinkbull I know alot about you. I've watch you si..." And with that Shadowman jumped from the shadows and cut the assassin in to.
"Shut it Lament! We don't want Pinkbull here to end our fun now do we? Well then Pinkbull, it seems you tried to knock me out. Now let me return the favor!" And with that Shadowman lept at Pinkbull with his sword ready to stab through his chest. Pinkbull lept to the side and swung the board at Shadowman's head. Shadowman turned around and slashed the board in two.
"Curses! P.o.t.O take this fight for me until I get back!" Then Pinkbull dashed twards the tool shed next to an old apartment complex.
"Well P.o.t.O it seems Pinkbull has left you out on your own. Care to join me?"
"Never!" And with that P.o.t.O thrust his SPAM reaver at Shadowman. Shadowman leapt into the air and grabbed the SPAM reaver and pulled him up into the air. Shadowman thrust his blade at P.o.t.O who coutered at thrust the blade at P.o.t.O. They landed on the ground with their respective weapons against one another. P.o.t.O relived the grind by pulling the SPAM reaver away.
"Getting tired are you?"
"Actully I wanted to give Pinkbull a chance." And with that Pinkbull dashed twards Shadow man with a 2 foot dagger shining in the pale moonlight. Shadowman ducked but Pinkbull jumped over and lunged the dagger at Shadowman's back.
Shadowman swung around and blocked the knife with his blade. Pinkbull retracted the knife and lept into the shadows. Shadowman looked around in confusion and got struck with a fist to the face from Pinkbull.
Before Shadowman excaped he said these words,"Curse you Pinkbull you may have won this battle but I will make sure every creature will have a blood thirst for your death!" And with that Shadowman left in a plume of smoke.
Wow, this is suspenseful just to write. Expect chapter 6 tomarrow. Let's just hope P.o.t.O finishes his fan-fic. His fan-fic was the best one in my opinion and insperated this one.
Good night, and good luck. Seriously I'm really tired.
27th June 2006, 04:06 PM
Could I be in it? :D
27th June 2006, 08:06 PM
Thanks all for your support and your roles will come into play later. So don't worry there is still 15 chapters to go. I'll make sure everyone who wants to be in it will be included. Expect more charecters to be placed in and removed and come back again. I'll make sure the plot gets better. And make sure you don't make your requests to be in it too spesific because I might end up dissapointing because I want as many charecters as possible to be a humanoid. Anyway expect chapter 6 tonight.
My current favorite fanfics are:
RWP high school (http://forums.rarewitchproject.com/showthread.php?t=4803)
My story I've never told (http://forums.rarewitchproject.com/showthread.php?t=671)
27th June 2006, 09:27 PM
Can I be In it as well?
28th June 2006, 02:17 AM
I want to be a ninja, with cybernetic implants and a katana.
Basically like this guy (similar costume, too):
Please? Also, I wanna be good.
28th June 2006, 04:22 AM
Ok then remember if your in the story your probably not going to be in if for more than 2-3 chapters. More charecters mean more speech less action and such and I like to keep it to the limited few.
Chapter 6: A new face of evil
"I wish we could just kill him." Pinkbull said exausted from the rather short fight.
"I think he won't die anytime soon." P.o.t.O and Pinkbull started their journey down the highway, killing the zombies that approaced the two. They kept walking for about an hour until they saw a quick glisten in the woods.
"Did you see that?"
"It was probably nothing."
"Fine but keep your guard. You never know what going to pop out up he..." And as soon as those words a vampire lurched right for Pinkbull who moved to the side. Pinkbull took out his dagger and swung it at the vampires heart. But before Pinkbull could hit it a ninja impaled the vampire with a katana.
"Holy crap!" Said both P.o.t.O and Pinkbull in unison. The katana keep flying until it rammed into a tree as the vampire was disintigrating into dust.
The ninja looked briefly at the two and then lept off into the night.
"Well...he was nice. He could've at least givin a name...Well I still think pirates are better." They stared at the part of the forest where the ninja came for a moment and then got back to the highway.
"Did you see him? That was amazing! I wonder where he came from? Do you think well see him again?!" P.o.t.O was obviosly obsessed with the mysterious ninja.
"Well I don't know but we need to find a town or some people soon." They walked along the highway until they saw a a bus driving down the highway.
"Is that a...? Yes it's a bus! Quick wave them down!" The bus came up and stopped for them.
"Where ya headed?" Said the bus driver as they got in.
"We just need to get to a town and some food. Thank you so much." Pinkbull said before they took their seat.
The old man next to them that looked about 80 had a newspaper with a sudoku puzzle on it and he was clearly having a hard time solving it. The old man said, "Hey do you like sudoku. I like the name. It rolls of the tongue. Suuuu dooo kuuuuu." Said the old man while poking the two who were clearly agitated.
The old man got really close to P.o.t.O and whispered into his ear, "IIIIIIIIIIII liiiike Suuuu do kuuuuuuu."
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Yelled P.o.t.O as the bus drove on to Shadow point.
Ok. I admit this is a little cheesy but I didn't want to over use any of my charecters or use ones that I had plans for. Expect better chapters tomarrow. Also good job dmoss on RWP high school dmoss.
28th June 2006, 04:30 AM
Once again, nice job, PB. Thanks for the props at the end there...you didn't need to do that! :)
28th June 2006, 04:46 PM
I think that, when dmoss comes back, he should wield dual Bowie knives.
28th June 2006, 10:18 PM
Well everyone thank you again for all your support. It's the only thing that makes me post the chapters every night. Thanks to you I have a reason to make these, and to have fun writing them. Expect chapter 6 tonight. Also the old man was for some comic relief and wont play any big role in the future ones. I'm always glad to see enthusiasm twards my work. :)
29th June 2006, 07:49 AM
That is a very good story.
Double EDIT: Gih sounded retarded in that post.
30th June 2006, 06:59 AM
Alright after a long needed vacation (one day). I'm back in the saddle and ready to write chapter 7. Expect action, adventure...and well. That's about it. Oh and sorry for the cliché title. It only seemed fitting
Chapter 7: We don't go to Ravenholm
The bus stopped in a town that looked like it hasn't been inhabited, by humans for years. There were at least 2000 zombies in the town. The pair got off the bus.
"Hey what are we doing here?"
"This is the closest place to an airport. Just go through the town. All that there is is zombies. A plank of wood can handle 'em. Just grab a bat or somthing and it can be fun. Well, Good luck."
And the bus driver closed the door and drove on the other road.
The too stood there for a second looking at the town of zombies.
I really don't want to do this. Look at all those zombies. I mean your SPAM reaver can only take so much. Well I guess we have no choice. Shall we?"
And the pair started walking twards the town. They both grabbed a plank of wood to use on the zombies.
"Why don't you use the SPAM reaver? I mean it would work alot better."
"No. This just looks too fun. The SPAM reaver is jusk cheating." P.o.t.O smiled and got ran into the crowd of zombies. Pinkbull said,
"Well in that case..." Pinkbull picked up a crowbar from nearby and started smashing the zombies.
They smashed every zombie in the head that the could and it fell right off and killed them. Pinkbull stopped for a second to let the zombies to get a close perimiter. Then he took the crowbar and swung it in a full circle and kill 20 zombies at once.
"Hey P.o.t.O this is pretty fun. But we have to get back on track so lets go to the airport now."
"Pinkbull. You seem different. Look you need some rest."
"Look I'm fine. I...I'm just angry at some people involved with Rare. Lets just get out of here and kill who ever is doing this."
"Fine but there's one problem."
"Whaaoh my god..." Pinkbull said as he stared at the sky. It was turning from dark to a firey red. From it mysterious creatures emerged from a hole in the center. Whatever it was it didn't mean the two were getting there any faster.
Meanwhile at the Rare Ware headquarters.
"Well then Shadowman it seems you have been failing us. Twice now you have failed to eliminate Pinkbull or P.o.t.O."
"But sir it's not my..."
"But nothing! You see Shadowman, I don't look highly to warriors of mine that fail to do what I tell them too."
"Sir I'll do better this time..."
"There won't be a next time Shadowman! You see people who fail me don't get to keep what I have givin them." Two henchmen came from the door behind Shadowman and dragged him out the door.
"Wait, were are you taking me. Wait no, no, noooooooo!"
"You see Shadowman I always get what I want. I trust you wont be a bother after your...changes." Grey Jinjo could here the screams of terror as Shadowman was dragged down the hall. Grey Jinjo got up out of his throne and looked out the window to his new empire. The Earth was soon, his.
Expect Chapter 8 soon. Expect the story to get even better then.
30th June 2006, 03:31 PM
Shadow's not being killed off, is he?
30th June 2006, 04:40 PM
Don't look at me! I didn't do it! ...or did I? I mean, it could have been me. I was dragged off once, you know.
Looking good, PB! Storyline is getting better and better!
1st July 2006, 03:21 AM
Well I was thinking for awhile and decided that once I'm done I'm going to make a backstory for all the charecters so just because I'm done with the story doesn't mean it's over.
Chapter 8: Some old friends...
Well at about now the two are looking up at the sky in horror as all the strange alien monsters emerge from the sky. They looked onward in panic until the first two reached them.
Pinkbull dodged the oncoming monster and jabbed it with his knife. The blade got loddged in a rib and pulled him onto the strange creature. Pinkbull pulled it out but instead of bleeding the creature healed up in a few seconds. Pinkbull grabbed onto the creatures head and held on until it would go low enough for him to jump off. The creature flew around in the sky for awhile until it started diving tward a lake nearby.
"Oh sh..." Was all Pinkbull could say before it smacked right into the water.
After Pinkbull surfaced he swam to the shore. He stopped for a moment to catch his breath. After a half an hour, Pinkbull got up and started walking twards where he thought was the highway until he heard a familiar voice.
"Why Pinkbull it seems we meet again."
About 20 minutes before Pinkbull crashed in the lake.
P.o.t.O looked at the creatures from the sky in panic. As soon as the two came near Pinkbull slashed at one of the creatures and got swept up.
"Pinkbull!" P.o.t.O yelled but he couldn't hear him. P.o.t.O faced the oncoming creature and split it right down the middle. Instead of the creature dieing it regenerated into two monsters.
"This is definatly not good." P.o.t.O said as he slashed at each monster and only made more of them. P.o.t.O kept at it for 2 more minutes until he had a plan.
There you go chapter 8. Expect chapter 9 same time tomarrow.
1st July 2006, 04:25 AM
Great job! I like how you're going through two different points of view. It really makes your writing more Three-Dimensional! Can't wait to see what happens to your character!
1st July 2006, 05:26 AM
Heh, nice. This story is awesome man. Keep up the good work *Flies through silver ring*
3rd July 2006, 03:23 AM
Sorry for the long delay (Like one day) but I'm back and ready to write. I'm really exited for this chapter for some reason.
Chapter 9: P.o.t.O Part 1
P.o.t.O spotted a small whole in the mosters head. He realized that this might be a weak point and stabbed right for it. As soon as the blade entered the head of the monster it burst into a puff of hot ash.
"Hmmmm. This works pretty well." The other monsters dived tward P.o.t.O and he lunged forward and got each one in the weak point.
This sharade kept up for 20 minutes until the monsters suddenly left. They flew twards a lake to the east.
"Why hello there again P.o.t.O. It's an honor to see you again." Said a shady figure that came from nowhere.
"Who are you?"
"Remember twenty-seven years ago in the New Zealand Crisis. We were working together in a covert op. Before your SPAM reaver days."
"I know it was wrong but that's behind me now. You were mortally wounded and the your life just wasn't worth a World War 3. I'm sorry but it's not my fault Subdrag."
"Not your fault?! I was captured P.o.t.O! For twenty-six years they experimented on me P.o.t.O. The changed me P.o.t.O! Twenty-six years of my life P.o.t.O. Gone! And all because you left me for dead! You ruined twenty-six years of my life P.o.t.O. Now I'm here to get revenge." And with that Subdrag leapt at P.o.t.O with two small blades ready to kill.
I might write chapter 10 tonight or tomarrow. Expect the New Zealand Crisis in the P.o.t.O backstory once book one is finished.
3rd July 2006, 03:57 PM
Huh...Subdrag sounds like Grey Fox...
BTW, you decided to make us all in our 30's? I don't want to be that old...
3rd July 2006, 05:36 PM
Well I just went through the chapters and cleaned the up a bit. Just deleted words that didn't fit added .'s, " where I forgot to put them. And a few misspelled words.
4th July 2006, 06:53 AM
Good work, Pinkbull. You've done a fine job this time, Pinkbull. I think I can remember SubDrag talking like this on several ocassions, Pinkbull. Please remember to walk the dog, Pinkbull. Can't wait to see Chapter 10, Pinkbull!
But, seriously, nice job. This is an exciting twist!
4th July 2006, 08:45 AM
That it is surely so.
5th July 2006, 12:42 AM
Well I have great plans for chapter 10 and 11 but I won't post anything tonight because of Fireworks day. Expect chapter 10 and mabe 11 tomarrow night. I love writing these. Even more when people like them. Thanks for the words of enthusiasm, and Happy Fireworks Day!
6th July 2006, 05:48 AM
Well then. After a short hiatus. I'm back in the saddle. I got hit by a Roman candle and that hurt. Well I shouldn't keep you all waiting it's time for the halfway point for book one.
Chapter 10: P.o.t.O Part 2
Subdrag charged and P.o.t.O ducked below the two blades and jumped at Subdrag. Subdrag parried the blow from the reaver and lunged at P.o.t.O. P.o.t.O dodged the blow but got his arm scraped by the blades edge. The two stopped and glared each other in the eye.
"Bah! Your swordplay is getting rusty P.o.t.O." Subdrag said before he lept into action. They swung their swords. Blow by blow. Parry by Parry. They fought. P.o.t.O Jumped back as Subdrag swung both blades for P.o.t.O's head. Subdrag charged at P.o.t.O with his blades aimed to kill. P.o.t.O in a last second reaction held his reaver and Subdrag ran right into it. Subdrag muttered these lasts words before he dies, "Hah...Looks like you weren't so bad after all..." And Subdrags head fell.
P.o.t.O removed the reaver from the corpse. He looked at Subdrag and said his final words. P.o.t.O dug a grave for his old friend and buiried him.
"Well Subdrag, I'm sorry it had to be this way. I'm sorry for what happened. I hope to see you again." And with that P.o.t.O walked away from his old friend.
P.o.t.O walked on grudgingly until he saw a body on the ground with a note attached to him.
"Pinkbull!" P.o.t.O said once he saw the identity of the body. He checked his vitals to see his condition. He was unconsious. Didn't look like he was getting up anytime soon. P.o.t.O pulled off the note and read it
When you read this I'm already gone. I want you to remember what I told you. Be careful I don't want you to end up how I did. I'm setting up the "project" right now. Don't worry well end this thing. No need for a signature.
That's all that was written on the page. P.o.t.O sat on the ground and waited.
Hmm. I didn't think this was too good but it's hard to see it from the writers prospective. Expect Chapter 11 tomarrow, same time.
6th July 2006, 07:38 AM
Thats good man. Great job. Keep up the fight scenes.
8th July 2006, 06:16 AM
Sorry everybody for the delays between chapters but I usally don't get the chance to write them. Anyway I just want to note that this takes place at the 1st half of chapter 8. I also like the concept of where my story is heading. Also I want to know your favorite chapter is. Just put it in your posts. Also you might want to read chapters Nine and Ten again to make sense of what is going on and making links to what was going on before. Enjoy. :)
Chapter 11: Pinkbull's Story
"Who's there?" Pinkbull asked as he looked into the shadows to find the speaker.
"Oh I'm sure you'll remember me. It was in the old 2008. You remember we were partners. We stopped this from happening until history replayed itself two years later. We didn't stop it. We just postponed it."
"Wait...Gold Jinjo? I thought you stayed behind. How are you here? This, this can't be possible. Can it?"
"Well Pinkbull it seems like it is. You see when I stayed behind it wasn't supposed to happen. If I stayed there it would've caused a time paradox and stop everything from existing and end time itself."
"Well it's good to see you again Gold." Pinkbull said as they walked into a meadow surrounded by trees. They walked to about the meadow when Gold stopped.
"What?" Pinkbull asked.
"Aim for the spot on their forehead."
"Wait wha..." Pinkbull said as a large group of the same monsters that attacked P.o.t.O and him earlier. As soon as the monsters got close Gold Jinjo pulled out a polearm.
"Glad to see you still have the weapon I gave you Gold." Pinkbull said before he leapt, dagger in hand at a monster stabbing it in the vulnerable spot on its forehead. On contact the monster burst into a pile of ash.
"One down thirty to go."
They kept the rather uneventful fight up for about fifteen minutes until they were all dead. The two were exausted and sat down. Pinkbull told Gold all that had happened in the past two years.
"P.o.t.O? You've seen him?! I need you to tell him somthing." Gold Jinjo told Pinkbull a message and told abot his time away.
"Pinkbull I need you to know this."
"What is it?"
"You see, in the past I have been working on a "project" in case this happened. It is a place hidden beneath the earth. It has a device that can get rid of the barrier guarding Rare. You can get in there and kill Grey Jinjo and stop end this hellish war."
"Well why don't you come with?"
"To use the device would require someone's energy to power it. I am going to do this. But don't worry. I'm not going to die. The exaustion well keep me brain dead for the next twenty years."
"Well that's good. I'd hate to see a good friend die."
"Now then I will have to knock you out. I'll see you again when the time is right."
"Wait wh..." Was all Pinkbull could say before he got punched in the face.
Also I don't hate you Grey. Your Adminship just makes you all the more reasonable to be evil.
8th July 2006, 06:20 AM
My favorite chapter is where I enter in a blaze of badassed-ness.
11th July 2006, 06:41 AM
Ok them I was in a writers block and spending some time with some friends in the past few days. Spending some time relaxing and such but now I'm back and ready to write your 2nd favorite fan-fic! (My personal favorite is dmoss's RWPHS.)
Chapter 12: The Lost Ones
Pinkbull was laying on cold pavement when he awoke.
"He's awake." Said dmoss with the mysterious ninja and from earlier with P.o.t.O.
"Holy crap what happened! I was out for what, a few minutes and now everything I knew is upside down?!"
"I'll explain the story to you. He drink this it'll stop the shaking." Said the ninja as he tossed him a cantine with a strong smell from inside that smelled like nature itself.
"I'll have a drink when I know what the hell is going on!" Said Pinkbull angerly.
"Now explain how this all happened or I'll shoot ninja boy here in the fa..." Was all Pinkbull could say before the ninja lept to Pinkbull with the blades end to Pinkbull's throat.
"Easy cupcake. We wouldn't want to kill a team mate now would we?" The ninja put the blades tip to Pinkbull's neck. He could feel it vibrating strongly making his vision slightly blurry.
"Ok that's enough! I'm sure Pinkbull is confused so lets give him the rundown. It all started yesterday..."
24 hours ago near Pinkbull's unconsious body
P.o.t.O heard a shudder behind a bush in the woods. P.o.t.O summoned his SPAM reaver and looked around cautiously. He heard a slight wind against his neck. P.o.t.O stood there and on second to soon he trust his SPAM reaver at the chest of the mysterious person behind him.
He looked aound but no one was there. He felt wind against his neck again but this time ducked before the ninja's blade could stab through his back. The ninja then turned around and ran twards P.o.t.O with his blade ready to meet P.o.t.O's neck. P.o.t.O thrust his reaver up but it was too late. The blade stopped at P.o.t.O's neck. The ninja drew back his blade and stepped back.
The ninja took off his mask and said, "Your past your prime old man."
To be continued............
11th July 2006, 02:59 PM
I wanna be in one, these are great stories.
This is why I believe sns wasn't involved in the game, for pinkbull to create great stories, for RWP to rise. I think that there have been alot of fun throughout this forum and it's all because of Rare.
12th July 2006, 06:32 AM
Well it looks like Rare's Last Laugh is almost done but I have plans for the future. Here's a list of my upcoming projects
1) Rare's Last Laugh back stories
2) Rare's Last Laugh 2 (Project Name)
3) Pinkbull RWPHS
4) A Summery of Video Gaming: Written by Pinkbull
5) Another story I've been thinking of writing for a long time. With Rare Witch Project Members of course.
I've got alot of things of to write so I've got alot to do.
18th July 2006, 02:06 AM
Okay expect chapter 13 in a 1/2 an hour. Also once this is done I might make RWPrison. Grey Jinjo might end up as the warden...
18th July 2006, 03:04 AM
Allright. You've waited for a long time but here it is. Chapter 13!
Ch 13: A Story Continued
"Who...Who are you?" P.o.t.O asked with the reaver at guard.
"I'm your better. I'm stronger, faster and smarter."
"I doubt it. But what is your name?"
"Names are meaningless but if you really want to know, it's SSJ3 Gogeta." Said the ninja in a cold and heartless voice. It showed to P.o.t.O's experience that he has a very dark and painful existence.
"I know your kind. Project Deathfall subjects. They were said to be killed after they tried to excape. How are you still alive?"
"That's not the point od this conversation now is it. Now I belive you have a friend unconsious on the ground."
"Oh crap I forgot Pinkbull!" P.o.t.O ran off to the highway.
P.o.t.O arrived and found a familiar face checking Pinkbull's vitals.
"Oh my god is it...Dmoss! I thought you were dead! What happened?"
"When Pinkbull ran off to do who knows where a portal of some sort opened up in the bushes. When I got near it somthing popped up out of it. I shot it but it just wouldn't die. Before it knocked me out the last words I heard was Pinkbull calling my name. When I came to, well...I'd rather not talk about it."
"Ouch so how'd you end up here?"
"Gogeta found his way in and got me out. As far as I'm concerned he saved my life. So what's your story?" Dmoss asked as Gogeta approched the other three. P.o.t.O explained the story of what happened and then Pinkbull woke up.
"And that's what happened."
"I see then. So what's Ninja boys story?"
"He doesn't say much. A storys past his cold one part sentance the pops up everyonce and awhile."
"Hahahahahahahahaha! I'm baaack." Said a voice from behind the party.
I'm back in buisness baby! It feels good to write this again. I can't wait to write ch 14. I just need to figure out how to fit the rest of the story in the next 6 chapters...
19th July 2006, 12:08 AM
Heh. Sounds good. I think that... FIGHT SCENE NEXT!
19th July 2006, 06:37 PM
Allright. I'm hoping to write ch 15 tonight so today might be the day you get 2 chapter!
Chapter 14: An enemy renewed
"It can't be it's..."
"Shadowman!" Said the creature from the shadows. It was Shadowman but somthing was different. He looked like the victom of hundreds of cruel mercyless expiraments.
"No matter then. He'll die all the same!" Said Pinkbull as he trust his dagger at Shadowman. He cut his right arm clean off while he just stood their and smiled as his are regrew.
"What you were expecting somthing else?"
"This could be a problem." Said Pinkbull as Shadowman rushed at them unarmed. He swung his fist right at Gogeta's gut but he cut it off with his katana. As it grew back dmoss shot Shadowman in the back of the head. Shadowman fell on the ground apparently dead.
"Wow. That was really easy. I would've thought he'd be a little bit better after all that ti..." Was all that could be said before Shadowman was allready up and rushing the party. The got out of the way and started attacking him from all sides. They kept slashing, shooting and they body just kept on getting regenerated. They kept this up but Shadowman wasn't going to die anytime soon.
The battle kept up until an unfamiliar figure jumped from the tree's with a strange object in hand. He pressed a button on it and before Shadowmans fist could make contact with P.o.t.O he dissapeared into a plume of black smoke.
"Amazing, just simply amazing." Said the figure walking twards the party.
"Who are you?" Asked dmoss with a sword at guard.
"Well, I'm someone you definatly not fool around with. You see the clouds up above? Can you smell the death in the air? I did all that." The figure paused for a moment before continuing his speech. "You see. I didn't the way the world once so I changed it. And soon I'll rule it. I've been watching your little charade for a long time now. Very amusing I may add. So I thought I'd drop by and have a little conversation."
"But who the hell are you?!" Asked Pinkbull in rage from what he was hearing.
"So you really want a name now don't you? Well if your that desprite my name is Grey Jinjo. Now before I go I have a little party favor for you all." Hundreds of zombies and those flying creatures came out from the sky and bushes.
"Cheers." Said Grey before he started walking down the road. The party knew that this definatly wouldn't be fun.
20th July 2006, 05:43 AM
HUZZAH! Another chapter well written. HUZZAH!
20th July 2006, 04:52 PM
Ooooh! Nice work...I wasn't expecting Grey to pop out of the trees like that. Nice. I love how you said "those flying things" for lack of a better description. :p
Nice job, Pee...
20th July 2006, 05:14 PM
Yeah. I had a name for them but it would make it sound like a sexual joke so I didn't want it like that.
Hmmm...I have a good idea...Just wait until tonight...
21st July 2006, 06:16 AM
Okay After this I have two projects I'll be working on. RLL2 and SnS: a documentry in parts.
Chapter 15 presented my Mountain Dew...Exept I don't get any money. Also it may be extended to 25 chapters if don't finish up the story in time.
Chapter 15: Glyders
"Glyders!" Said Gogeta allready hacking away at their weak points as they turned to ash.
"So that's what their called. Well they'll die the same." And they started hacking away at the hoard of zombies in Glyders as they all turned to dust. This kept up until they were all dead.
"Where'd he go?!" Said P.o.t.O once the dust settled.
"Looks like he left while we killed all these things" Pinkbull said as he cleaned off his blade.
"We have to go." Said Gogeta as he jumped into the tree's along with dmoss.
"Wait! Damn they left...So what do we do now." Said P.o.t.O as he stabbed the reaver into the ground in anger.
"Look. Do you see that there? It's the road to a private airport I used with an old friend."
"We have to take that road? Crap..."
"Who said were walking?" Pinkbull said as he lifted a panel on the backside of a tree. He pressed a button that exposed to motercycles with mounted turrets on both sides.
"I have some contacts. They funded most of my 'trips'." They got onto the motercycles and started on their way on the long dark road.
As they went down the road glyders started coming down from overhead.
"Pinkbull! How do you use the turrets anyway? There's no buttons!" Just then the turrets locked onto the center of the glyders head and shot it down with one bullet.
"It's a state of the art target system. Kills everything else so you don't have to. The army never used it because they couldn't risk it getting into the hands of enimies." Pinkbull said as the Glyders kept coming near and getting shot down.
They were going along the road until they got about a mile away from a deep chasm.
"There's a bridge coming up ahead and after that, we get to the airport. Allright here's the bri-wait! Where'd the bridge go?!" Pinkbull said as the slammed on the breaks. It slowed them down but not enough.
Oh shi..." Was all that was said before the two fell off the cliff and into the river.
21st July 2006, 06:52 AM
Nice ending therem Pee...! Looks like the crew has gotten themselves into another predicament! How will they get out of this one? Way to keep us hanging! :)
23rd July 2006, 05:31 AM
Nice story, Pinkbull! I just read the whole thing, and plan on reading the rest. It's really good. The second "Oh shi..." moment!
23rd July 2006, 06:05 AM
Will Pinkbull ever lose weight?
Will he finally find some salad at the grocery store that isn't allready brown?
And will he ever get that freakin gatorade bottle open?!
You'll never know because this chapter has nothing to do about it but that gatorade bottle is stuck and won't come off. And I allready drank half of it...I always love the "Oh shi..." moments. I probably wont use it again because it will just get old.
Chapter 16: The Jaws of Death
"Did you take care of the bridge?"
"Yeah. It should keep the zombies away but the Glyders, well..."
"Well what? Shouldn't the defense systems shoot all of them down?"
"The turrets works just fine but someone got into the system. They turned off auto system. The only way to use it is through manual controls and we can't waste soldiers controlling all the turrets."
"Well then sgm6 your the one who made the damn things! Go to the consoles and fix it!"
"Sir, if you may. Please call me Mike."
"Bah! Programmers. Your lucky your just a civilian and not down there with the rest. Now just fix it!" Said Commander GM2K as he went back to the map table to route out the air strikes on Rare.
In a river 30 miles east of the Conflict Task Force compound
Who am I...
Where am I....
Where have I been.....
Am I dead?......
"P.o.t.O!...P.o.t.O!...Wake up P.o.t.O!" P.o.t.O was laying unconsious on the side of a river. Pinkbull had a fire started. He was badly injured from the fall and was using a panel on the side of the rock wall to try and contact the base. He gave up since after an unsucsessful hour.
"P...Pinkbull...Good to see you aga..." And P.o.t.O clapsed back down from exaustion.
"Mike! Did you get the defense grid online?"
"No sir, not yet. Someone went in and changed the IP for the back door. It leads to a trap then boots you out of the system. I never programmed somthing this difficult though."
"I don't care about that! The Glyders are coming in more frequently and are troops are starting to run out of ammo. I need it back up now!"
"I've got it! Just re-route the IP connection, insert a set deletion, add in the new data and...Done! The grid should preform better than before and use less power. It also looks like the comm. terminals are up again!"
"Thank god. I was starting to think this would be another Area 51!"
"Hey! Two figures are coming up on the scanners! I can ID one of them. It's...It can't be! It's Pinkbull!"
23rd July 2006, 06:12 AM
Ok that was a good read. Keep writing it.
24th July 2006, 05:58 AM
Rare's Last Laugh 2
Rare's Last Laugh Lost chapters
Rare's Last Laugh Backstories
A pet project of mine I've been wanting to write for awhile now.
So my work isn't even close to done. This is all fan-fic related but I also have "Stop 'n' Swap: A complete documentry" So I wont be leaving RWP anytime soon :D
Chapter 17: Zombies on a Plane
Pinkbull awoke to the sound of a helecopter overhead. He got up and saw a familiar face in the pilots seat.
"Bah! Cut that crap you know your not in the army anymore. So what are you doing down there. I can't belive you made it through the minefield! You can tell me once we finally finish what we started. Now we can't land the copter here so your going to have to stay there and tend to your friend there!" Said GM2K from the copter. It flew off beyond the horizon abruptly.
After about two hours a 12 wheeler came driving down the river side.
"About time! I have a leg fracture and P.o.t.O has alot of broken bones."
"Well then hop in! And throw cupcake over there into the back!" After Pinkbull got the body in the back he got into the pasenger seat as they drove back to the base.
"So where have you been in the past few years? It was pretty silent without you around on the bombing runs. And after the whole timeline change incident with you and Gold, well...It's been very wierd."
"I'll explain later. Hey wait a second! Before I left you were working on a nanobot repair system. Is that working yet?"
"Yeah. Infact here," GM2K handed him a needle with a small amount of strange liquid in it. "Just press the button to activate them then jam it into the spot you want to be fixed. Works very well for bullet wounds." Pinkbull used it and almost instantly his leg was comepletly healed.
"Put this in cupcake!" He handed him another needle and Pinkbull put it into P.o.t.O. In a few minutes he was fully healed and up.
About 20 minutes later they arrived at the base.
"Well it's good to see you again Pinkbull. But we can catch up later. But before we head to the plane I want to show you somthing." They went into an armory with weapons that were beyond modern technowledgy. They checked out the various weapons on the shelves.
"Here. I want you to take this. The name is the 'Proto Phazer 4000' I like to call it a zapper. It runs off energy from any light sorce so as long as your not in pitch black it will have a recharge sorce." He handed the two the guns along with a pack of the nanobot healers.
"You guys can sleep on the plane."
"Gah! Your too useful GM. But one question, what happened to Kab?"
"What?! What happened? How'd he die?!"
"He died! I don't want to talk about it anymore."
"Oh..." Pinkbull didn't want to say anymore because when GM2K was sad about somthing. There's a reason you don't want to know.
"Now lets go to the hanger. You guys get a ride on the Boing 936. It's the only thing that can make it through the air waves."
"Sweet!" Said P.o.t.O after haven't said anything since he passed out.
"So now he speaks! Anyway get on the plane and get into Rare! I here Gold has somthing planned."
"Thanks GM. Let's just hope this doesn't end up like last time..." And with that the two got onto the plane ready to finally end this thing.
26th July 2006, 01:06 AM
It's ok that you didn't include me, but I was enjoying my vacation for awile, then read up to here.
If there is any remaining chapters, go ahead and include me with the information given at page 1.
It's ok if there isn't, I'd like to be in the sequel though, it's a great fanfic, one of my favorites.
26th July 2006, 01:33 AM
I was actully planning that. Anyone who wasn't in the original and wanted to be will be in the sequal. But expect a very clishe happy ending for RLL. It's been dark the whole time. Everything needs alittle happy :D
28th July 2006, 05:29 PM
Gah! Well I'm angry right now. There's some very...odd. Stuff going on in Gabbly. I know pretty much nothing. I missed the whole thing because of a cerfew too. And everyone else is acting mysterious about it...First the mysterious link now this...This is great insperation for Rare's Last Laugh 2. Next chapter coming tonight...
"I don't like the CC very much..."
28th July 2006, 05:57 PM
can i be in it? can i be a realllly powerful.... thing?!?!?!?
fine then can grunty have a big part in it? WITH RYMES!!!!!!!!!!!
28th July 2006, 06:04 PM
You'll be in RLL2. Sorry. No Grunty in it though. This is more forum fan-fic like than anything else...
28th July 2006, 08:24 PM
but... grunty... but.. .but.. but.. but.. but... WHY!!1!!ok here is ym fanfic!
one day some noob asked pinkbull to put grunty in his fanfic., he said no. so, grunty comes into the room with the zombys from pinlbull's fanfic. grunty is in a tank with nukes and the zombys have grenades, machine guns, and CHEESE!!!
take they, pinky :0
1st August 2006, 09:31 AM
DAMNIT! For 2 times now I was typing the chapter and before I finished the compy freezed up. I'm hoping this one will come through.
Chapter 18: Hitting Hard
"Well it's good to see we finally get a break. Here have a cold one." Pinkbull said as he looked through the fridge.
"Gah! you know I only drink red wine. What do you have." Pinkbull looked through the cabinants and found an old bottle.
"Lets see here, It's just a glass bottle with the letters 1881."
"Good year. Just give me the bottle and a glass." P.o.t.O said before Minjo barged into the room.
"Zombies!" Said Minjo as he cut on in half as it approached him.
"How the hell did they get in here? We ran a full scan before we left!" Pinkbull said drawing his knife.
"Oh yeah. Bad news. They can teleport."
"That's not good. Oh crap! The pilots!" Pinkbull said as he started dashing to the cockpit hacking and slashing at the zombies in his path. P.o.t.O in Minjo followed after slashing at the zombies that appeared in front of them. As Pinkbull was running he looked out the window and saw what he dreaded. Glyders.
"This is not fun!" Said Pinkbull as the ship started descending as it was being rammed by the glyders.
When Pinkbull reached the cockpit he found two dead pilots and a zombie. Pinkbull killed the zombie and hopped into the pilots seat.
"All right then I just have to...Crap! I can't fly a plane!" P.o.t.O and Minjo soon made it into the cockpit after Pinkbull.
"What the? Oh crap! The pilots are dead! Pinkbull I hope you know how to fly this thing."
"That's the thing. I don't. Allright I'm going to try and keep this thing in the air and you'll need to use the weapon systems. There's glyders all around us."
"Wait! Do you here that?" Minjo said.
"What?" Asked P.o.t.O as Pinkbull was figuring out the controls to the plane.
"It sounds like-" Then there was a large explosion that rocked the plane.
"They blew up the left turbine!" Then there was another explosion just as loud.
"Both turbines are out. Were losing altitude at a dangerous rate!" Said Minjo observing the instraments on the side panel.
"Brace yourselves! Were hitting land. And hard!" They strapped themselves in as the ground came closer and closer.
"Ten seconds until impact! Were coming up on a uncharted mountain range. It still says it's in England. Near Rareware!"
Meanwhile at Rareware
"Ah yes. It seems the pair are crashing into the mountains. You know what. I'm feeling generous today. Give the glyders their souls back. Promote them to...Shall we say warrior?"
"Yes sir!" Said R Hunter before he left the Greys chamber.
"It seems their crashing right now. I'd hate to miss the explosion. Computer, magnify cooridnates 89 34 West. And uhh...Get me some red wine. 1881 If you please."
"As you wish." Said the computer in it's cold dead voice before it fufilled it's masters wishes.
"This should be a show!"
Back on the plane
"Impact in T minus 5, 4, 3, 2, 1..." Said the computer system before the plane crashed driving into the cold hard mountains.
That hurt alot.....
Am I awake...
Or am I unconsious......
Pinkbull got up from the wreckage of the plane and saw that P.o.t.O was looking for the him.
"P.o.t.O! Your allright! Where's Minjo?"
"Pinkbull! You missed Gogeta and Dmoss. The stopped by and gave me this note. Also Minjo wanted to go with them so he left." P.o.t.O handed the note to Pinkbull and he read it
If your reading this then I need you to stay away from Rare until the shields are down. Stay far away from it too. Their are scanners that, if activated would send millions of zombies and glyders your way. You'll know when the shields are deactivated but until then keep on the down low. Also I can't wait to see you again Pink. I have a mess load of inventions I made while I was gone.
1st August 2006, 09:35 AM
Nah it's ok. No worries. I understand the whole freezing thing.
Great chapter as always. I liked the part with the zombies.
1st August 2006, 09:36 AM
Thanks. Expect chapter 19 and mabe even the finale chapter 20 tomarrow.
1st August 2006, 08:32 PM
*expect chapter 19 and mabe even the finale chapter 20 tomarrow...*
2nd August 2006, 06:06 AM
Chapter 19 Coming soon.
2nd August 2006, 09:52 PM
I don't come in here to much I just noticed your fan fic its pretty good pinkbull.
2nd August 2006, 10:12 PM
Can I be in it the only person who hasn't used stop'n'swop for fear of ruining my game. Also can I be the one you come to for help when the story progresses?
5th August 2006, 05:50 AM
Well here it is. Chapter 19!!!!!!!////1111oneoneslash
Chapter 19: The gate
The two were sifting through the rubble for some food to pass the time whilst the waited for the shields to go down. P.o.t.O went under a smoking pile and popped his head out with the bottle of wine P.o.t.O never got to drink before the crash.
"Pinkbull! I found the wine!"
"It's all yours. I'm just interested in finishing what I started..." Said Pinkbull looking at the immensly large tower that was at least 200 stories tall. It was amazing how it was built so fast.
P.o.t.O was about to drink from the wine when suddenly lightning started to rain from the skys as it struck the shield and the sensors around the Rare complex. when the shield was struck it started to glow a strange purple and neon black color. As the lightning continued the shield started expanding and glow red.
"Get down! Pinkbull yelled as the it started to expand it . They leaped behind the large pile of rubble from the plane as it passed overhead. It rust nearly killed them but the steel was enough to block it. Eventully the force from the blow wore out and it dispersed in a shower of sparks.
"Allright then. Shall we enter?" Pinkbull and P.o.t.O started walking twards the huge tower avoiding the flames left over from the now dead shield.
After a half an hour of otherwise uneventful walking the approached the gates.
"Wow. That's a pretty big gate. About 3 stories I'd say. No expenses spared when it comes to building a fortress it seems..."
"So you want acsess to the gate do you? Well your going to have to kill me first!"
"Wait a second? If you really don't want me to get in then why are you making me fight you for the key. Couldn't you just kill me without having a key? I've always wondered why people do that..." Said Pinkbull as he pulled out his knife and some strange optic device in the form of sunglasses.
"Well you see. Grey Jinjo works in very...Mysterious ways. And I follow them. Now then if you want them then your going to have to kill Grey's Right Hand Man. R Hunter!" As he leaped at the two with blinding speed.
5th August 2006, 02:14 PM
Great work pinkbull. Can't wait for the next one to come out!
Keep it up!
6th August 2006, 03:11 AM
Sunglasses, huh? Might they be...never mind. Another great chapter Pink! One more to go! :D
6th August 2006, 05:45 AM
that makes no sence.. if grey is hi frtiend then why is his right hand man killing him?
but still.. more!
6th August 2006, 06:07 AM
A story today will be told. Swords will clash. People will die. And an empire will reign. It is the ending of the beginning. It is the tale, of fallen warriors. Rare has done it's strike upon the Earth and its people have fallen. But there are two who rose up and struck back.
Chapter 20: The Ending of the Beginning
Pinkbull wielded the glasses and his knife as he dodged R Hunters blindinly fast attack
"Where did he go?!" Said P.o.t.O looking around confused.
"He is going faster than the eye can see. But these "Crappy Shades" can detect the movement and slow it down for the human eye. I only have one pair." R Hunter ran at Pinkbull with his fist ready to strick him. Pinkbull jumped up and dodged the blow. P.o.t.O swung his reaver around carelessly hoping to to get hit. R Hunter went directy at P.o.t.O while he was staring in the opposite directing swinging his reaver. Pinkbull lunged forward and struck R Hunter in the gut. As he layed there dying he said his last words.
"Bah...You've still got alot more to go. I'll be seeing you later Pinky..." And with that he took one last breath, and died. Pinkbull grabbed the key and brought it up to the gate. He scanned it along the side panel and a small door opened next to it.
They entered a lobby with a familiar face at the front desk.
"Manders! What are you doing here?" Said Pinkbull as he ran forward happy to see a familiar face.
"I work here now. I built the archetecture for the building and the transportation system. The pay is good so I'm happy. Hey where is Ice? He hasn't called me in ages..." Said Mandy with a concerned look on her face.
"He got umm, captured by the zombies. I tried to save him but there was nothing I could do. So where can we find Grey Ji..." Mandy broke out crying.
"Grey. He sent those zombies after you. How could he have killed Ice?! You know what I need you to kill him for me. Here I'll open up a lift for you. Give him hell Pinkbull and P.o.t.O. Give him hell!" Mandy opened up a panal and pressed a button and a lift came down from above.
"Thanks Manders. I'll make sure he's dead. P.o.t.O being here just makes it alot easier!"
"Wait. Mandy before we go do you have any red wine?" Said P.o.t.O questioningly.
"Actully I have one right here from 1881 it seems..."
"P.o.t.O we have no time for this. Let's just go. You can have wine after we kill Grey." The two got on the lift and Mandy pressed the button that took it directly to the top.
Outside Rare. 108 stories from the bottom of the fortress.
Dmoss qued in on the microphone, "According to the blue prints your going to want to just just under the white number 42 bolt. It won't set off any of the sensors and you should be able to place the stop the metamorphasis of the captives from a panel 200 meters away. Here I'll put a marker on your HUD. But whatever you do. Do not activate any trip wires. We don't want 200 guards with plasma guns shooting your ass now do we?"
Back on the lift to the top.
Pinkbull and P.o.t.O were killing all the zombies that hopped onto the lift in a sad attempt to kill the two. Some glyders came from the sky to hinder their progress.
The lift finally reached to the top and the doors to Grey's personal quarters opened. They both stepped in the room and saw Grey at a desk.
"Oh. You can just set the files on the, oh it's Pinkbull and P.o.t.O again. What a pleasant suprise. P.o.t.O if you don't mind me an Pinkbull need to chat alone so if you could please." Grey pressed a button and two guards came and dragged P.o.t.O out of the room. They could here the sound of plasma rifles fireing and a sword slashing.
"Truly an ignorent friend you have. Anyway Pinkbull. I have been watching you since the last time we met and I am not happy of what I have seen. I was also alittle late at destroying your little base with GM2K and all your other little friends. Needless to say you don't have to many loved ones left."
"You, basturd!" Pinkbull swung his knife at Grey and he blocked it with his bare palm. not affecting him in the least bit.
"Enough! Pinkbull there is a time to fight but this is not one of them. Now then if you'll excuse me this place is about to blow and I don't want to be in it. Bye for now." And Grey leapt onto a chopter that was flying away.
"Wait what?!" Then a large boom sounded all throughout the lair. Debre fell and crushed Pinkbull. Never to be seen again.
P.o.t.O, Dmoss, Mandy and Gogeta made it out alive. Pinkbull was confirmed dead after the whole building crumbled to ground zero. Grey Jinjo had sucseeded in dominating the world. Killing all the leaders and converting all troops to his own satanic army. There was obviously no hope left for the Earth exept for a small risistance force known as Free beings.
6th August 2006, 05:43 PM
Oh noes everyone is dead. good chapter, looking forward to RLL2.
6th August 2006, 06:54 PM
I'm not dead.
7th August 2006, 02:08 AM
ok.. so comment. bad ending lol but still a good story
7th August 2006, 05:55 PM
I'm thinking of redoing the ending since I had to rush it because I was using time I didn't have. If my parents catch me up past one I get me compy taken away...
7th August 2006, 08:28 PM
e gahd.. wqell just remove the chapter. cause im going to tell you the truth.. the current last chapter is crap =.= no offence, but it doesnt make sence at all.
mop it up.. better yet nuke it and re design it lol. it could be alot better.
and the part with the person trys to kill you for the eky makes no sence.. i as like.. huh?
7th August 2006, 09:34 PM
Okay. I came up with a lame excuse. Ah-hem. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! It was a fake chapter all along. You all should've realized this from the beginning! Anyway chapter 21! Coming tonight.
7th August 2006, 10:48 PM
yay! i gace somneone constructiove critism (sp lawl) without getting flamed! =)
7th August 2006, 11:12 PM
ha ha killed your self off.
9th August 2006, 05:52 PM
Read this while listening to this (http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sony/ps2/mgs2sk8ing.mid).
9th August 2006, 11:59 PM
^^^ and what is that may i ask....? it woulds like hyrule temple from SSBM..
10th August 2006, 01:38 AM
In Metal Gear Solid 2: Substance, it's the Skateboarding Mode music. It's a punk rock remix of the main theme.
10th August 2006, 03:47 AM
10th August 2006, 09:01 AM
Can I be in one of your fan fics I mean I am a great fighter for a girl like me... I wish I were in this current fan fic now I'm in the next one.
11th August 2006, 03:50 AM
Okay let me clear this up. Chapter 20 was NOT a fake. I was too lazy to rewrite it. Now go read Rare's Last Laugh 2!
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