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Walrus
22nd October 2003, 08:07 PM
I was perusing through the forums, and I thought that there weren't enough stories being published. I enjoy writing, so I through it upon myself to make it happen. And, now, without further ado, The First Of My Weekly Fictional Short Story Installments.


Emerging from the earth, a lizzard about a mile tall, with large, curved claws, and a thin, lanky structure let loose a blood-curdelling roar. With it's green, dirt colored scales and long snout, it was pertruding from the earth at a slight angle. Crawling and stuggling out like a confused child, it made it's way in a random direction.
The village of Tomara was not far away in that direction, and, much to the dispair of the villagers, it was coming for them. Breathing fire like a fierce dragon, it burned trees and many other flamable substances in its derranged path. Wobbling due to its immense size, and finally regaining its presence of mind, it began to run. Slowly at first, and then working its way to a full sprint.
Running at a speed that rivals that of Concorde Jets, it was now crushing the earth's crust with every earth-shaking step. Every time his structure made contact with the earth, a small, but not-so-insignifigant, earthquake shook the opposite side of the earth.
Legends have told the town of Tomara that it would be destroyed by a gargantuan lizard creature. Unfortunatly, there were no scholars in Tomara, at least none that could read the ancient tomes within Tomara's curch walls.
When It stopped at the gates of Tomara, the whole town stood still. Warriors preparred their swords, maces, flails, morningstars, and other various weapons. Archers fletched their arrows. Sorcerers started studing spells for use against the gaint monster.
The archers of Tomara flung their arrows straight and true, landing four or five of them an inch into the Lizard's scaley skin. The Lizard let out a scream so loud that most people went deaf.
Luckily a sorcerer knew a spell that allowed the deaf to hear. He recieved less praise than expected. A gaint fireball was formed through a ritual spell among the wizards. It was hurled through the smoggy air at the Lizard. It made contact with a huge firey explosion. The Lizard again induced deafness among the villagers. The common spell was prepared and cast.
Now The Lizard had it's chance for attack. It screached and ran towards the town. Stepping on about half of the town, people screamed in horror. It tripped, falling on the church.
A black liquid, most assuredly not blood, gushed out of the Lizard's body. The tainted opaque liquid continued flowing fluently from it's wound, as it let forth a bellow that was heard echoeing in the world for all eternity.

And that is the first enstallment of my short story. Look foward next week for another piece of the tale. [ Hint: I never said it was dead ;) ]

[ Edit: ] What a candid bunch of folks here! You can post feedback, you know =)

banjosrevenge
30th October 2003, 07:04 PM
cool good work

Walrus
30th October 2003, 07:23 PM
Screaming and flailing, the Lizard certainly was putting up a fight. Struggling against it's own being, the Lizard finally went limp. The townspeole cheered in delight at the death of their town's antagonist.
About a week later, the corpse was really a problem. A very powerful wizard had been studying a telekenisis spell. Walking calmy up to the 500 ton body, he began chanting a ritual spell with three other sorcerers present. Moving their arms slowly towards the mountains, the body began to rise. Very gradually at first, but then it was going straight; to the mountins of Acepsi. Building up speed it finally started to whiz through the air a great speed. Eventually it was out of sight.

Well, that was a short installment. That story isn't that long. Here's a start for next weeks' story:

ONE - PRELIMINARY MATTERS
Harry dozed in comfort in his beige office chair, mumbling gibberish every once and awhile. His state of santcuary was disturbed abrupty by his boss, Mr. Baudler.
"Harry, you lazy ass!" Baudler roared.
"Whu-ah-what uh-hahuh?" Harry shot off nonesense, waking up.
"Wake up, you idiot!" Baudler yelled, and walked away.
Harry woke up completely, and, leaving his work behind, got up to get some coffee. He remembered nothing about how he had fallen asleep. He thought nothing of it. After all, he didn't remember a lot of things. Upon entering the break room, he met up with O'Brien.
"Harry!" O'Brien said, waving, "Been sleeping again, I see. Eh-heh-heh." O'Brien stretched. "Well, I just woke up from a rather unscheduled nap myslef, If you know what I mean. Eh-heh-heh."
"Yeah." Harry slothed over to the coffee machine, only to find a rather disturbing note attached.


Memorandum-----------
"Community" coffee is
no longer supported by
the company. Employ-
-ees who wish to drink
coffee must bring their
own to work. Effective
10/15/2021.


"Shit... That's today" Harry said "What's next, no chairs?"
"Yeah, damn company keeps cuttin' the budget." O'Brien was talking again, "Which is pretty dumb if you ask me. They keep cuttin', but there's nothing to cut for. They just keep cuttin' the budget to annoy us."
"Pro'lly" Harry replied, chuckling.
"Yep."
Harry made his way back to his desk. He didn't know why, but the conversations with O'Brien, although usually one-sided, were uncomfortable for Harry. There was always that uncertain thing about him. He couldn't put his finger on itÉ Oh, well. It didn't matter; he only saw O'Brien in the break room anyway.

Upon Harry's return to his desk, he found that his stapler had been lifted from his desk.
"Scavengers." he mumbled. "Now I have-ta go to that damn supply level."
The suppy level was much like a supply closet, except that it occupied a whole floor. It was about 5 floors down, and the lighting was poor, at best.

Walrus
1st April 2009, 04:45 PM
Just thought I'd bump this to say... I'm glad my storytelling ability has improved. That is all.

Deebs
1st April 2009, 04:59 PM
Just thought I'd bump this to say... I'm glad my storytelling ability has improved. That is all.

I'll say.

Walrus
1st April 2009, 05:00 PM
Then again, I was 13. Soooo.

Deebs
1st April 2009, 05:03 PM
I used to write stories at 13...

...They sucked too. :]

Hey, I'm Grump
1st April 2009, 05:26 PM
Train number 1 non-stop to Creative Cavern now boarding

Walrus
1st April 2009, 05:28 PM
Train number 1 non-stop to Creative Cavern now boarding

I don't think the Creative Cavern existed when I posted this. Lay off.

Hey, I'm Grump
1st April 2009, 05:31 PM
Oh, it was a bump. I like bumps:

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Walrus
1st April 2009, 05:41 PM
Oh, it was a bump. I like bumps:

http://www.xcomment.com/g3/img/poster___boobs052708113237.gif

You have my attention.

Deebs
1st April 2009, 05:49 PM
Oh, it was a bump. I like bumps:

http://www.xcomment.com/g3/img/poster___boobs052708113237.gif

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