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ChillyDark
25th June 2006, 10:17 PM
This is it.
This is a fan fic made by me, if you would like to try and make a better RWP Movie, make another topic.
Rated: PG 16.
Sexual Themes.
Violence.

Prolougue:
RWP, the most famous Rare site in the world.
Made by Ice Mario, SubDrag, and Kola, this site is a huge Rare Site with everything you need to know about Rare.
Grey Jinjo remembered the hillarious, great April Fools Prank, he and some other members played on the RWPF.
He decided to go talk to Ice Mario, about something Private.
But before he did, he looked on his computer, 50000 rep points! A new record!
Unfortunately, along with that he received a PM from an unknown sender.
It said:
"Grey Jinjo, I wish to talk to you on the RWP Gabbly Chat alone.
If you detest accepting this, delete this at once."
From Unknown.
Grey Jinjo signed on Gabbly Chat and there were over 50 people on.
But, the unknown sender was also on.
He said.
"Welcome Grey, I see you have come on after all."
"What is it that you want."
"Oh nothing really, just the deed to the whole forums, from Ice Mario."
"You cannont have it. It is Ice Mario's treasure."
"I will not take "no" for an answer."
Grey Jinjo looked and immediatly Gabbly chat was closed.
He Pmed Ice Mario, however, instead of Ice Mario answering, the unknown sender did.
"I have hacked Ice Mario, the whole board is mine."
Grey Jinjo was furious, he decided to PM the other inportant members, the moderating team, Veterans, other inportant members.
That is it for the prolougue, if you would like to post to help me improve it, or would like to be in it, do so.
This isn't an RPG, it's a fan fic.

pinkbull
25th June 2006, 11:00 PM
A major improvement would be me in it. But seriously, the beginning was a little choppy with not that much sense of flow. Never have it jump too quickly to one thing like. "Then they entered the building, They went up to the control room and pressed the button. They left and went outside then they went to the hotel and it started raining smoked sausages." It has to have action or somthing to fill the void. Skipping like that is for chapter transitions. That's my 2 cents on the subject.

ChillyDark
25th June 2006, 11:26 PM
I like your advice, here's Chapter 1.
Chapter 1:
The members were sitting in a meeting room, to hear Grey Jinjo's speech.
"I had recieved a PM from this annoymous member who has hacked RWPF, with Ice Mario's account.
Grey Jinjo said in a voice that everyone could hear.
"That ******, why the **** would he use Ice Mario's account." Gold Jinjo grumbled.
It seems one member grinned at this, he had just joined today and acted like a veteran, untill now.
"U NOOBS HAVE BEN HACKZORED BY US L33T SPAMMZORS." The member who's name was L33t boy laughed.
"Who is the one who PMed me? Was it you L33T Boy?" Grey Questioned.
"HAH, NOOBZ U DONT RELIZE IT WUZ MASTER SPAMM KEENG, WHO TRANSFORMEDD INTOO TEH UBER DRICE MARIO." L33T Boy said.
L33T Boy dissappeared, and Grey Jinjo decided to find this orginazation.

lamentofking
26th June 2006, 01:23 AM
This is it.
This is a fan fic made by me, if you would like to try and make a better RWP Movie, make another topic.

Dude great idea. But the weird thing is i thought about this back when school was in session. My idea was to make three seperate movies and i was going to turn lamentofgrunty into the main villian and make king of kings like the heir to grunty. I had made a little story to see how things would roll.
(I had called it Lamentofking and the Nefarius 5, located in the Creative Cavern) That story would of been like those tv shows that come out in series and then they end up making the movie. One morning when i was getting ready for school, i actually started daydreaming about this. I imagined it all, how the trailer would look and everything. There would be 3 movies.
1st: RWP:The Rare Witch Project
2nd: RWP:The Heir of Grunty
3rd: RWP: The Last Battle

All three movies would be rated PG-13, and wouldn't be a cartoon, but a real-motion pictured film. Something like The Chronicles of Narnia, except it qwould only be 3 parts instead of 7 and it would be a different plot.