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24th July 2006, 04:16 AM
It was 2035...
The snow was coming down hard. It fell against the ground and melted, sometimes staying, covering the path to Spiral Mountain. There was a Severe Winter Storm Warning for the rest of the night.
BKSonic was sitting in a chair in his house at Jinjo Village. He was watching a TV show about...well, he wasn't really paying attention. He was focusing more on the snow outside.
Suddenly, three figures appeared down the road. They were coming towards his house. "Who's that?" BKSonic thought, as the figures came closer. He could just make them out. They were two moles and a green Jinjo. BKS grinned.
The moles and the Jinjo knocked on the front door. BKS opened it, and they dashed in, covered in snow. "Brrrr! It's freezing out there!" said one of the moles.
"Hello, Shades, Glass, Jinjer. What are you guys doing here so late?" BKS asked. Shades and Glass were the Son and Daughter of Goggles, Bottles the Mole's son. Jinjer was a girl green Jinjo.
"We came to hear that story you told us you'd tell us the other day." Jinjer said.
Then BKS remembered. "Oh yes, that story! Ok, gather around the fireplace, you guys look cold!"
They all went over to the fireplace, BKSonic turning off the TV and taking his place in the chair. "Okay, this is a story about the Rare Witch Project. You know about it, right?" BKS said.
Shades replied, "Yeah, Grampa's a member! Glass and I have been there a few times with him and Great-Uncle Jammy."
BKS nodded. "Okay, and I know Jinjer knows about it. Did you kids know that one time, it was almost destroyed? Let me tell you the story. The year was 2008..."
Okay, this is my shot at a fan-fic. Trust me, it'll get better in the next few chapters. This was basically a Prolouge to explain what's going on.
24th July 2006, 04:22 AM
Ooooh! I like the way that this is looking, BKS! I can't wait to see how this turns out! Way to go! :D
24th July 2006, 04:30 AM
Well I've done this with about every fan-fic that's written in a non-script form so...
Things you could improve on
2) Not to many type enter enter type.
3) I'm not in it :D
I'm picky like that so don't take it personal.
24th July 2006, 04:37 AM
XD No problem, Pinkbull. And I plan on adding in people from the Forums, so you might be in, or you might not. :D
25th July 2006, 05:27 AM
(--Chapter One - A Message--)
The year 2008. Everything was normal at the Rare Witch Project. Members were chatting, hacking into Rare games, and...sleeping.
The way people got into the RWP back then was through a portal in Jinjo Village. It took you to an undisclosed location, the lobby of the RWP. Which is why most members set up houses around the island.
All the Leaders of the RWP, such as Gold Jinjo, P.o.t.O, GM2K, and SubDrag, lived at the RWP, in rooms high above where the members were. On this particular day, Gold Jinjo was walking down to get breakfast when Ice Mario stopped him.
"Gold," He said, nervously, "I need your help. Hurry, it's urgent."
"But can't I get breakfast first?" Gold asked.
"No! I need you, now!" Ice replied, his patience thinning.
"Allright, allright. Whaddya need me for?" They walked down a few more steps, and then turned right into a hallway. Ice and Gold entered a door labeled, 'No Entrance.' The room had a giant communications screen on it. It also served as a surveillence viewer, judging by the videos stacked on the walls.
"Last night," Ice explained, "I got a message from a person calling herself the 'Rare Witch'. I need you to watch this." Ice walked up to the screen and took out a remote. He pressed a few buttons and the screen flashed to a video.
On the screen was a green lady with warts who had a black witch's hat on. "Hello, Ice!" She said. Her voice was raspy and sounded like she was old. "How are you? I haven't seen you since the - well, you know. Now I have a new name. The Rare Witch! I changed it when that damned Bear almost killed me thrice! Anyway, I have a message for you and all the members of your stupid club. I have an army of thousands upon thousands of monsters, and I know where the RWP is located. If you don't surrender your location within three days, I will send my forces to your castle and destroy you! EYAHAHAHAHA!" Then the screen turned black.
Gold was awestruck. "Th-That was...Grunty!" He gasped.
Ice nodded. "Yes. She wants her house back, and she'll stop at nothing to get it." Ice looked out a window, down to Spiral Mountain. "I don't know how she got her body back, but she's a threat the Project. We have to tell the others."
Gold nodded, and ran to the Announcement Chamber.
25th July 2006, 06:07 AM
Oooooooh! Wonderful job, BKS! You're doing great with this story...
I like how you've got us right into the storyline, straight-away. I want to keep coming back for more! :D
25th July 2006, 09:16 AM
Sounds good so far, I'll keep an eye on this topic ;)
25th July 2006, 09:53 AM
this sounds entertaining :)
25th July 2006, 12:01 PM
Of all the great fan fics I've read, this is one of them. If you stop writing this I will do something really annoying. Or whatever. Just keep writing it coz it's great.
27th July 2006, 05:06 AM
(--Chapter Two - The Plan--)
The Announcement Chamber was a huge theater-like room with a stage and microphone on it. There were seats for every member, a podium for announcements, and chairs on the stage for the Leaders. There was also a closed off section for sending messages through the entire Project.
Gold ran to that closed off area, turned on the mike, and said, "All members, please report to the Announcement Chamber, on the double." The message was sent through megaphones to every room.
Soon after, members started filling the seats. Gold was sitting in his chair on the stage, and grinned when he saw that BKSonic, Dmoss, DevilBottles, and Wario354 were all sitting next to eachother. Just like always. They were all best friends.
After every member was in the Chamber, Ice Mario and SubDrag came up to the podium.
"Members of the Rare Witch Project," Ice said. "We have received a message from a being known as the 'Rare Witch'. She has a plan to take over our Project, and...Oh, just watch the video."
The message from the Witch came on the screen. As it finished, members gasped, and looked worried.
"What can we do to stop her?" Pinkbull asked.
"That's why we called this meeting. To think of a plan." SubDrag replied.
For a while the members thought of plans to defeat this Witch, and protect the RWP. Finally, BKSonic stood up.
"I have an idea." He said. The others looked at him. He had already talked it over with Dee, DevilBottles, and Wario, and they all agreed. "Why don't we send out 8 of our members; Dmoss, DevilBottles, Wario and I, and four others, to go find this Rare Witch and defeat her, while the rest of the members protect the RWP?"
Many of the members nodded in agreement, or whispered things like, "Yeah, let's do that!"
"How many of you think we should take BKSonic's idea?" Ice asked. Nearly every member raised their hands. "Allright, then it's settled. We'll find four others to join you guys, and send them down with you to the Armory. All you other members, go back to your homes. Come back tomorrow in this room to plan our defense. Meeting ajourned.
Okay, I know that chapter kinda sucked, but the next one will be good. I swear! :D
27th July 2006, 07:50 AM
It was actually pretty good.
30th July 2006, 03:49 AM
Hey guys. I was gonna write Chapter 3 yesterday, but we had a lot of stuff going on at home. I've wrote part of it, and I'll finish it tomorrow night. And thanks for the comments! :D
30th July 2006, 04:05 AM
I didn't notice this thread till tonite , the story is really good , keep the chapters coming bksonic.
30th July 2006, 04:10 AM
Please put me in it. As a badass ninja, like in Pinkbull's fanfic (yes, I wanna be good.)
31st July 2006, 04:05 AM
(--Chapter Three - Preparations--)
"How do you think we can beat her?" Dmoss asked.
They were walking towards the third floor, where the Armory was. The meeting had just ending, and they were to meet P.o.t.O there.
"I don't know..." Wario replied. "I'm sure we'll be able to figure out something. And besides, with all the weapons in the Armory, we could just kill her...to...death...Yeah."
They all chuckled, and arrived at the Armory. BKS opened the door, and they entered.
They were in a huge room lined with weapons of all shapes and size on the walls. There were racks filled with armor, and P.o.t.O was examining a long gun-shaped weapon when he noticed them.
"Hey guys!" He said. "I'm glad you're here. I'm going to supply you four with the greatest of RWP technology, weapons, and armor."
DevilBottles had a huge smile on his face. Everyone knew he was crazy about anything related to weapons.
P.o.t.O walked over to the rack of armor. "First, you each will get one of these." He picked up one of the armors. It was small, it looked like it wouldn't fit even a 5 year-old.
BKS started, "How are we supposed to-" But then P.o.t.O tried to put on the armor. It instantly resized to fit him. Everyone gasped.
"It fits every size." He said. "It has holders for every weapon we have, a shield built in that can be resized, is bulletproof, and with just the press of button on the inside part, it becomes full body armor, but is also really heavy, so it'll be hard to move while using that. Oh, and so enemies don't know you have it on, it can become invisible. Cool, huh?"
By then everyone had put one on. P.o.t.O next walked over to the Weapons.
"You each will have different weapons, because of your abilities. BKSonic, you will have Banjo's Backpack, which can hold anything, and can be whacked at people, and the Golden Bananas, which you can throw at enemies and they come back to you, like a boomerang, or you can light them, and they explode like a grenade." P.o.t.O handed the weapons to BKS, who put the bananas in the backpack.
"Dmoss," P.o.t.O said, "You will get the Pocket PC, which has all the powers of a computer in a small, easy to carry package! You will also get Dynamite. It's not regular Dynamite, mind you. This Dynamite can blow up anything." Dmoss also took his things, and stored them in his armor.
"DevilBottles," P.o.t.O grinned. "I know about your cool yet creepy obsession with weapons, so I'm going to give you the blowy-uppy stuff. First, the Rocket Launcher. It launches rockets, in case you didn't know. Hooray. Second is the CM, or Controlled Missle. You shoot it like a Rocket Launcher, and then control where it goes. Pretty simple." DevilBottles was very happy.
"And finally, Wario. I'm going to give you the vehicles. First, the SC, SizeCar. It looks just like a normal car, but can be shruken or grown to any size with a remote control. Also, there's the SB. SizeBoat. Same thing as the SC except it goes on water." Wario took the two currently miniature vehicles and stuffed them in his armor.
"Now," P.o.t.O explained, "The Rare Witch's Lair is far away to the East. We can teleport past the ocean between the Isle 'O Hags and the island the lair's on, but it's still very far from there. You will need every ounce of your being to make it through and beat her. I will also give you these sizable tents with food and water, but the rest is up to you. Now, follow me."
P.o.t.O lead them to a room with a teleporter in it. Almost every member of the RWP was in there. P.o.t.O led them to the teleporter, and they stepped in. He walked over to a control console. "Ready?" He asked. "Ready!" BKSonic replied. P.o.t.O punched the switch and the four friends disappeared, to chants of "Good luck!" and "Kill her!".
Oi, that chapter was long. Don't expect them all to be like that. I really liked typing it, though. :D
31st July 2006, 06:45 AM
That chapter was REALLY well done. Continue...
6th August 2006, 04:07 AM
(--Chapter Four - The Ocean--)
To BKS, it felt like his body was being stretched apart. They were twisting and turning, flipping up and down, spinning left and right.
Suddenly, the sensation ended. The four friends had came out of the teleporter.
"Ahh...they really need to fix that thing..." DevilBottles said. No one answered. "What's wrong guys?" Wario pointed down. DB looked, and said, "Oh, cr" before they fell, "aaaaaaaaaap!"
They splashed into the ocean, making a huge wave, which was there for about 5 seconds before falling. "Yeah, they really need to fix it." DB said.
"Where are we?" BKS asked. The ocean seemed to stretch around them for miles.
"I don't know," Dmoss replied, looking for any sign of land, "But we're probably far from the Lair."
A little lightbulb appeared above Wario. "What the-" He grabbed it and threw it behind himself. "We have that SB thing, guys!" He reached into a pocket and took out a mini-boat and a remote control. He pressed an up arrow shaped button and the boat grew to the size of a large speedboat.
"Sweet!" DB exclaimed, climbing into the boat. He checked his compass. "P.o.t.O said that the Witch's Lair was to the East. It's that way." He said, pointing to the right. "Good thing I brought this thing."
"Allright...Let's go!" BKS said, turning the boat on. The engines hummed to life, and BKS turned the boat to the right, and went off. They traveled for about five miles, when Dmoss' cellphone rang.
"Hold on, guys." Dmoss said. "It's GM2K!" BKS stopped the boat. Dee flipped open the phone. "Hello? Hey GM2K!"
"Hi Dmoss. You guys holding up okay?" GM2K replied.
"Yeah, except for the whole dropped in the middle of the ocean thing!" Dmoss said.
GM2K chuckled. "Yeah, sorry. That was my fault. I put in the coordinates before you guys left, and accidently put you 25 miles off coast. I suddenly remembered, but you had already left."
Dmoss said, "It's okay. P.o.t.O gave Wario that SizeBoat thing, so we're fine."
"Okay, good. But listen closely. I want you guys to watch out for Chilly Fak Fak. He's a swimming ice dragon that shoots electricity. He guards the area around the Lair. We don't know exactly to kill it, but apparently it involves fire and popping boils. Good luck." Then GM2K hung up.
Dmoss relayed the message to the others. BKS looked nervous. "A dragon fish who shoots electricity? How can we kill it?"
"Well, GM2K said it involves popping and fire, right? So lets just do that!" Wario looked unmoved. "It sounds like Chilly Billy and Lord Woo Fak Fak combined. A bear killed it...them, so why can't we?" The others nodded and they took off again.
The boat was just three miles from the island when the water started shaking violently. "Wh-What's happening?!" DB yelled. The boat rocked back and forth from the waves.
Suddenly, a figure rose from the water. It was a silver anglar fish with a dragon's neck and head for a...well, a head. It was covered in boils.
"It...It's HUGE! We're dead!" BKS shouted. Chilly Fak Fak let out a cry, and started charging at them.
I like that thing I came up with...Chilly Fak Fak. He'd be really cool in a game.
10th August 2006, 06:42 PM
(--Chapter Five - Chilly Fak Fak--)
Chilly Fak Fak charged at the helpless boat. BKS slammed the accelerator just in time and zoomed out of the way. Fak Fak hit the water with a splash, but came back up, ready for a second charge.
"How the hell do we kill that thing?!" Wario yelled, as Fak Fak charged them again, missing.
"Duh!" DB replied. "We have to pop those boils somehow! And with fire! Don't you remember what GM2K said?"
BKS nodded. "Right. But where will we get a fire popper...thingy?" Dmoss grinned.
"BKS," He said, "Give me one of your Golden Bananas." BKSonic did so, and accelerated out of the way of yet another charge.
Dmoss pulled out one of his Dynamites. He peeled part of the banana back and stuffed the dynamite inside it. "Wario, do you have that lighter you always carry? Give it here."
Wario gave Dee the lighter. "Okay. I'm going to light this banana and then throw it. It'll provide the throwing accuracy. When the banana burns away, the dynamite will light, and explode. BKS, I need you to get us right in the path of Chilly Fak Fak. I'll throw the Bananamite in his mouth,and it'll explode inside him, making him fall. Then we have to drive to him and DB'll drive. BKS
will have to hit the boils on Fak Fak with his backpack to pop them. Then we'll throw a few more dynamite in him, and blow 'im sky high!"
BKS nodded, and hit the accelerator to get out of the way of another charge. "Ready?" He asked. "Ready!" Everyone replied.
Chilly Fak Fak Hovered in the air for a moment, then charged. "Wait for it..." Dee said. Fak Fak was getting closer. "Wait for it..." Fak Fak opened his mouth, ready for a snack.
"NOW!!!" Dmoss yelled. BKS slammed the accelerator, and everything seemed to go in slow-motion. Fak Fak was right next to them, and Dmoss threw the Bananamite. It soared in the air for a second, and then landed on Fak Fak's tongue. He swallowed it, and readied another charge.
"Did it work?" Wario asked. "Oh yeah." Dmoss grinned. Suddenly, there was a muffled boom, and Fak Fak's eyes seemed to almost come out of his head. Then he fell to the ocean with a Splash!, and rested on the waves.
DevilBottles started to cheer, but Dee quieted him. "It's not over yet, DB." DB nodded, and took the controls. He drove over to Fak Fak and stopped next to a boil.
BKS grabbed his backpack, and leaned over the boat's edge. He swung at a boil, and it popped, splattering goo all over his face. "Oh, gross!" He groaned. The others snickered.
They drove around and popped all the boils, and once they were all gone, DB drove them to the mouth. Everyone got out two Dynamites, lit them, and tossed them in. "Okay DB, drive us outta here."
DB nodded. He pressed the accelerator, but nothing moved. The engine sputtered. "Oh no." Wario said. "Take cover!!!"
Everyone dropped onto the floor and covered their heads. The 8 dynamites exploded, blowing Dragon-Fish chunks everywhere. The force of the explosion shot the boat into the air. It flew to the East, towards the island. The boat started to fall right near the coast.
"Guys!" BKS shouted. "We're gonna crash! Hold on tight!" Everyone gripped the walls of the boat. It hit the ground with massive force and skidded 40 feet until hitting a tree. BKS blacked out...
So, how do you guys like the story so far? I plan to have a maximum of 30 chapters. But maybe not. Who knows? :D
1st September 2006, 06:51 PM
Wow, I haven't updated in a while. I've been busy with stuff (school) but I have the next two chapters written. I'll post #6 later tonight. :D
EDIT: Scratch that, Sunday night.
17th October 2006, 02:54 AM
(--Chapter Six - SSJ3 Gogeta--)
"...H...Hel...Hello?" said the voice.
It had been several hours since the crash. The sun had gone down, and the air was chilly.
"Hello? Are you four dead? Hellooooooo?" the voice said again.
"Ugh...k..keep it down...maj...major headache..." Dmoss said, sitting up. When Dee saw he didn't know the speaking person, he seemed more alert. "Who are you?"
"That dosen't matter right now." The person replied, "All that matters is that I get you and your friends healed. You musta gotten pretty banged up."
Dmoss suddenly noticed a pain in his right leg. He looked down and saw a gash down his leg. "How'd that happen?" asked the person.
"I dunno. We were battling Chilly Fak-Fak, and we killed him with dynamite, but couldn't get away, and got blasted onto the island." Dmoss explained.
"You killed Fak-Fak?!" the person looked astonished. "Well...I guess you are worthy enough to know my name. I am... @%*!?#."
"Heh? I didn't quite...understand that." Dmoss said.
"I know." @%*!?# said. "I'm not from here. So I go by a different name that people can understand. Gogeta. SSJ3 Gogeta."
"Okay, Gogeta. I'm Dmoss. My friends and I are on a quest to defeat the Rare Witch. She's trying to take over the Rare Witch Project." Dmoss shook Gogeta's hand.
Just then Sonic, DB, and Wario woke up. "Who's this?" asked Wario, rupping the sleep from his eyes.
"I'm SSJ3 Gogeta. Dmoss over here told me you guys killed Fak-Fak, and were going to defeat the Rare Witch." Gogeta said.
"Hey Gogeta. I'm BKSonic. This is DevilBottles, and Wario." They all shook hands.
"BK, Bottles, Wario, and Dmoss. I'd be happy to join you in your quest." Gogeta said.
"Okay, Gogeta. We have room for one more person, right guys?" They all nodded. "Okay. Welcome to the club Gogeta." BKS said.
DB's stomach rumbled. "I'm hungry. Do we have anything to eat?"
"No." Wario replied. "P.o.t.O gave us resizable cars, but not food?!"
"Hmm...I'll be right back." Gogeta said. He ran off, and came back in several minutes, with 5 fish.
"Wow!" They all exclaimed. That night, they all had a feast.
Later, when everyone was asleep, Gogeta snuck off to the woods. He took out a communication watch, and turned it on.
"Is everything going according to plan?" A voice asked.
"Yes. I have them eating out of the palms of my hands. Soon enough, I'll activate Plan Extermination." Gogeta said.
"Perfect! Ahahahahaha!" The voice cackled.
Okay. MAJOR late update. I know. School's tight. I plan to update every Friday or Saturday. On a story note, 'What a twist!'. :D
17th October 2006, 03:10 AM
17th October 2006, 01:53 PM
Can I be in this?
18th October 2006, 12:22 AM
Please don't make me evil...or at least turn good in the end.
18th October 2006, 01:18 AM
Don't worry, Gogeta. I have something planned for your character. :D
18th October 2006, 02:03 AM
Put me in your fan fic or um... else! Yeah! else! Your scared now, arent you. All like "OH NOES WHAT COULD 'ELSE' BE?" You'll just have to find out... *evil laughter*
EDIT: By the way, i don't care if i'm good or evil. That is, if you do put me in there. But you don't want to find out what "else" is.
3rd November 2006, 09:52 PM
(--Chapter Seven - The Prophecy --)
The next day, the gang were walking through the forest. Gogeta had a map, and, according to it, the lair was toward the NorthEast.
"Gogeta, do you know how far away the lair is?" Dmoss asked, for about the tenth time that afternoon.
"I already told you, Dmoss," the annoyed Gogeta replied, "It's about a two or three day walk."
"And besides, how are we gonna kill the Witch when we find her?" Wario wondered. "I mean, it took Banjo and Kazooie a freakin' Jinjonator to kill her, and even then her skeleton survived under a rock!"
The group pondered this for a while, when suddenly something jumped out of the bushes. It was an unshaved man with a ponytail, a faded tie-die t-shirt, and a peace sign hanging around his neck.
"Woah! A hippie!" Wario cried. "Who are you, and what are you doing here?"
"My name is Jimmingston Fugelberry Harkogow III, but call me Jim. I'm the heir to the Harkogow fortune." said Jim.
"Then what're you doing out here, when you could be livin' the life in some mansion in...in...Bulgaria?" BKSonic asked.
"Simple, my good friend." Jim explained. "I was living in the grasp of modern society, man. Factorys, rainforests being chopped down, George Bush disguising himself as a different person to be President again! It was too much. So, when I was on a plane to some fancy dinner thing, I jumped off the plane, landed in the ocean, and swam here, where I found a group of people just like me! Pretty sweet, huh?"
"Yeah...and you jumped out at us, why?" BKSonic said.
"I heard you dudes talking about the Witch who lives up there. I came to warn you about her. You can't go and battle her. She's become way more powerful since before." Jim said.
"We can take 'er!" DB cried. "No matter what's she's got, she's no match for us."
Jim looked worried. "No, you don't understand! The Rare Witch has a terrible new power. Apparently, she found this key and some eggs a few years ago, dude. One of my buddies followed her to this frozen cave on the edge of the island. She used the key in this icy keyhole, and put each of the eggs in a hole. Suddenly, the whole place lit up! I saw it from here, man! My buddy said that the Witch started laughing, and laughing, and she yelled, 'The prophecy has been fulfilled!' My friend ran back to us, and told us, and we moved our colony far away from there."
\Prophecy?/ BKSonic thought. \Maybe it's the...no, it can't be./
"Whatever," Wario laughed. "Crazy hippie. Come on, guys. Let's get going before we get infected with the 'Hippie Virus'."
As they walked off, they heard Jim yell, "Beware the Witch's power!"
Plot twist OMG! :D I like this chapter a lot. And don't worry. Jim will show up a couple more times.
5th November 2006, 03:43 AM
(--Chapter Eight - The Lair --)
The day after meeting Jim, the eccentric hippie, the group was sitting around a campfire.
"Like I said before, guys, how are we gonna battle the Witch?" Wario said, repeating a line from Chapter Seven. "And, if what Jim the eccentric hippie said is true, about her new power, then how could we possibly beat her?"
"We'll think of something. Now come on, let's get some sleep. We're almost to the lair." Gogeta yawned, and laid down, as did the others.
"DB, turn off that light!" BKS said.
"Sorry, BKSonic. I'm reading this awesome book, RWParody 2. There's a ball-kicking girl in it!" DB replied.
"Whatever. Just go to sleep."
The next morning, they were walking, and suddenly, the trees spread out of the normal surrounding-the-group...-ness, and in the middle of the tree-circle, was a tall, tall, tall, tall, *Forty minutes later* tall...t-tall...Okay, I've been doing this for almost an hour! You get it! It's an F'ing tall building!
The building happened to be The Rare Witch's Lair.
"Wow...that's tall!" Gogeta cried.
"Yeah...we finally made it! Let's go get that Witch!" Dmoss exclaimed.
The group ran towards the lair, but suddenly, a giant ape with a scepter appeared in front of them.
"If the Witch you wish to see, you must pass the perils three!" The ape boomed.
"Perils? No one told us about any perils!" DB cried.
"Well, if you want to face the Witch, you must pass 'em, you son of a-"
"Hold up." BKS interrupted. "What would these perils be, exactly?"
"I cannot tell you currently, but come with me, and you will see." The ape rhymed.
"Just a moment, please."
The gang moved back a little, and huddled.
"Ok, what do we do now?" Wario asked.
"Well," Gogeta answered. "We could, (A), just kill the monkey, and face the witch, or (B), go through three 'perils' that we may not come out alive from."
"If we choose (B), we'll get a few more chapters in, so let's do that!" Dmoss said.
"Chapters? What 'choo talkin' 'bout, foo'?" DB said, rappingly.
"Never mind that. Let's go!"
So they went back to the ape. "Mr. Ape....man...we've made our decision. We're gonna face the perils!" BKS told the ape.
"Ok, let's go, to the place, where the perils will take place." The ape said.
"Hey, you can't rhyme place with place!" Dee said.
The Ape pounded his scepter, and suddenly, the world started spinning. They could see the trees and the lair melting away, and something else coming up in its place. Then, as soon as it started, the spinning stopped.
They were in an empty, doorless room, with only a small lightbulb hanging from the ceiling for light.
"Okay, heroes, escape, there is none. It is time for Peril One!"
Wow, I made four or five rhymes! Well, one was place rhyming with place...but that still counts. :D
19th December 2006, 01:19 AM
Welcome to Random Updating Fan-Fics Land. Population: Me. Or the story. I'm not very good at the whole 'update on this day every week' thing. So except random chapters for awhile. Maybe one before Christmas (maybe)! :D
19th December 2006, 03:34 PM
Hm, this looks pretty interesting so far! I particularly like your writing style, for some reason. There's something about it that gets me. Keep it up!
12th January 2007, 01:21 AM
(-- Chapter Nine - OMG UPDATE!!! --)
The Ape pounded his scepter again, and the dark room melted away, revealing a room with a bright light. It took them a couple seconds to adjust to the light, then everyone (except The Ape) gasped.
The room they were in was filled with molten lava. There were metal platforms sticking out of the lava in random places. BKSonic looked up and saw a tiny light at the top, and guessed they were inside the center of a volcano. On the far side of the lava was a brown rusted gate, leading toward darkness.
"God, it's hot in here! Anyone got a bottle of water?" DevilBottles said. BKSonic gave him a water bottle. "Thanks. Where'd you get this?"
"I snatched it off that hippy guy." BKS replied.
Ew...Hippy water! DB thought, groaning.
"The first peril you will face, or I will hit you with a mace!" The Ape boomed.
"Okay...what exactly do we have to do?" Wario asked.
"I will explain in terms you understand, while I am waving my hand. Cross the platforms you must, with haste, or molten lava you will taste. Cross too slow, the platforms fall. That will be the defeat of you all!"
"We just have to get to the other side? Easy!" BKS said.
"Not exactly, little man. Let me explain part 2 of the plan. You all must go one at a time, lining up in an orderly line. If you don't go quick enough, and the platforms sink, the one behind you must jump two links. If he dosen't make it, and he falls, then you all fail."
"Kay, that sounds a little harder." Dmoss sighed. "I guess we all just go one at a time, and must get across quickly enough, or the platforms fall one at a time."
"Okay guys, we can do this." BKS said. "I'll go last, because I'm the main character of this story, and it would be dramatic if I died." BKS stepped farther away from the edge of the lava.
"I'll go first, then." Wario said. "I'm not a good jumper, so I'll get all the time I need."
"Then I'll go third." Dmoss shrugged.
DB frowned. He mumbled "...stupid little...making.....go second....grumblegrumble."
"Okay, my distantly related kin. Let Trial #1 begin!" The Ape pounded his scepter, and a giant timer appeared on the wall. It had 10:00 on it, and was slowly going down.
"Okay guys, we have 10 minutes. Go, Wario!" DB cried.
Wario hesitated, then leaped to the first platform. He made it. A screen showing him popped up below the timer.
Wario continued jumping, eventually making it to the last platform. He was tired from the jumping, and the heat wasn't helping.
"Jump, Wario! You can make it!" Dmoss yelled. He was always encoruaging like that.
"I can't make it! It's too far!" Wario shouted.
"You CAN make it, Wario! Take this!" DB tossed the water bottle, landing right in Wario's hand. He took a swig, wiped his mouth with his hand, and leaped.
Wario's foot landed on the stoney edge of the far side, but he was balancing on the edge. He leaned toward the gate, then toward the lava. Then, he fell. Everyone gasped.
"Oh my God, he's gonna die!" BKS shouted.
But Wario pulled himself up. He rolled next to the gate, and stood up, waving at them. "Your turn, Devil!"
"Alright. But if I die, stay away from my funeral. I never really wanted to come on this journey anyway." DB said.
"What?" BKS started, but DB already leaped. He landed on the platform, then jumped again. He was swift and weightless, like a feather, and soon joined Wario near the gate.
"Go on, Dmoss. It's your turn." BKS said. Dmoss nodded, then jumped. He jumped, leaped, hopped, and eventually made it to the other side.
"Come on, BK! We only have 3 minutes left!" Wario yelled. BKS saw he was right. The clock went down. 2:59, 2:58, 2:57...
"All right, I'm coming!" BKS jumped to the first platform, the second, and the third, then heard a low rumbling. The first platform was sinking into the lava!
"What!? I thought we had 3 minutes left!" BKS cried.
"Yes, technically, you do, but I want to make it a challenge for you." The Ape grinned, revealing several chipped teeth.
"You frigging cheater! Well...I can still make it anyways!" BKS jumped again, while the second platform sunk.
He jumped and jumped and jumped, slowing a little, until he reached the last platform. The one behind him was lowering, and BKS was tiring.
"Wario, toss me the bottle!" BKS said. Wario threw it, but it went just over BKSonic's head, and fell into the lava with a hiss.
"Damn it! Now I'm screwed!" The platform behing BKS disappeared, and the one we was on jerked, and started lowering. "No!"
He was already too low to reach the edge without smacking his face on the stone, but BKS reared, dashed, and leaped.
Time seemed to be frozen. BKSonic was in mid-air. The platform he was on was still barely visable under the lava. He reached out with his hand, and felt the stone between his fingers.
BKSonic grabbed the edge, but the rest of his body slammed against the wall. He groaned, and started to slip. His strength left him, and he fell.
BKS saw his life flash before his eyes. His parents...Joining the RWP...Asking to go on the adventure with 7 other people...Whatever happened to those other four, anyway?...
Then he felt flesh. DB had dashed to edge and grabbed BKS's hand. He hoisted him up, and they both fell onto the stone.
BKSonic gasped, and looked up. "Thanks...Bottles..." He gasped.
"No problem. Just don't almost die next time. And, uh...you might wanna check out your shoe." DB snickered.
BKS looked at his right shoe, and saw the tip was burned off from the lava. "Oh, crap! These cost me so much!" He cried.
Suddenly, The Ape appeared next to them. "That was a close shave, little human. Now on to Trial #2, just like the Blue Man (Group)!"
"What? That was a terrible rhyme!" BKS said, "Who writes this crap?"
The Ape pounded his scepter, and the room melted away, revealing-
14th January 2007, 01:42 AM
Dude, be consistant.
21st March 2007, 01:35 AM
(-- Chapter Ten - Trial # Dos --)
The room they were in was completely white. No doors, no windows, nothing.
"Where are we?" Gogeta asked.
"Gogeta! Where'd you come from?" Dmoss said.
Gogeta looked like he had just been at a beach, considering the clothes change. He was sipping a lemonade with a little umbrella in it.
"Umm... I was here the entire time. Yeah. I was just...invisable! And mute. And with lemonade. And totally not just missing because the Author forgot I was a character.*" He replied.
"Well...that's inconspicuously unsuspicious. Welcome back! Sort of." Dmoss said.
"Stupid fools! Shut up so I can tell you about the next trial!" The Ape yelled.
"Hey, I thought you rhymed!" BKS wondered.
"Yeah," said The Ape, "But the Author hasn't updated in awhile, and dosen't care about rhyming anymore, just like he forgot about Gogeta."
"Who's this stupid Author everyone's talking about?" DB shouted.
"Nevermind. Onto the next trial!" Boomed The Ape. "This trial is all about being at perfect balance in your mind."
"You mean like Buddhists?" BKS asked.
"THIS IS NOTHING LIKE BUDDHISM! In this trial, once I hit this magical wall switch, all your thoughts will be transported into reality. They will appear in the room and attack or help you." The Ape explained.
"That sounds confusing and unbelievable. How do we pass the test?" Wario asked.
"By surviving for exactly half an hour against your minds." The Ape said.
"That doesn't sound so hard! We can do it, right guys?" Gogeta exclaimed.
"You sound overly-eager. But that doesn't seem so hard. Let's do it." BKS said.
"Kay, bro. Just hang tight a sec and I'll throw that gnarly switch over there, dude!" Tha Ape said.
"And now he's a hippy. Will you EVER be satisfied?" DB said.
The Ape ignored this, and went over to the switch. He pushed it, and the room turned pitch black. Out of the blackness came four shadowy creatures with glowing red eyes.
"Why are you guys thinking of that?!" Wario shouted, "Just think of bunnies!" He pointed to the bunny skipping in the corner.
"No! Just imagine weapons, and, technically, they should appear!" BKS said.
Each friend imagined a huge sword, except DB, who just grabbed one of his rockets, grinning.
"Okay guys, ready?" Wario asked. They all nodded. "All right, let's go!"
They all charged at the monsters yelling.
Wow! A chapter? Actually happening? Wow. Just wow. :D
21st March 2007, 01:40 AM
Whoah,preaty big bump you've done there.:)
Anyway,nice chapter,can't believe I missed this awesome fan-fic!Can't wait for the next one!
21st March 2007, 02:16 AM
Yeah...heheh. My last chapter was over two months ago. I'm not good at updating. :D
24th March 2007, 01:04 AM
(-- Chapter Eleven - Trial # Dos Part Dos --)
Dmoss swung his sword at one of the shadow monsters. The sword cut a clean hole in the monster, and Dmoss pulled it out.
"Guys! I already got on-WHA?!"
The monster had melded back the hole, leaving no trace of being hurt.
"Uh-oh." Dmoss muttered.
"Whaddya mean 'uh-oh'?" BKSonic shouted. He had just cut a creature's arm off, then gasped as he saw it regenerate the arm.
Soon enough, the creatures had cornered the friends into...well, a corner. "Uh, guys?" Gogeta said. "We're boned."
"Yeah," Wario replied. "Unless...hey Bottles, you have those rockets, right?"
DB nodded. "I haven't used one yet, though, and if I shot it from here, we'd be killed in the blast."
"Okay," Wario said. "We'll distract the monsters, while you run over to the other side of the room. We'll jump outta the way, then you fire a rocket at 'em, got it?"
"Yes, sir!" DB saluted sarcastically.
"Hey stupid monster things!" Gogeta taunted. "You're dumb and retarted, because you're just shadows. I bet you can't even touch us!"
One monster grabbed Gogeta by the arm and pulled him up into the air.
"Well, that proved me wrong. Help me!" Gogeta cried.
BKS and Dmoss grabbed his legs, and tried to pull him from the monster's grasp, but he was too strong.
DB had already loaded the rocket, and was aiming at the monsters. Wario ran over to him.
"Bottles, don't shoot! One of the creatures has him, and Dmoss and BKS can't get him back!" Wario explained.
"Well that was a very unexplaining explanation." DB said. "And besides, I've already loaded the rocket. It has to shoot somewhere, or the launcher will blow up."
"Well, aim it at something else!"
"I can't. It's already locked onto the creatures!" DB cried.
"Just wait a sec. I'll be right back!" Wario said, running back to Gogeta.
They had managed to get one of his arms free, but the monster was still firmly holding onto Gogeta's other arm.
"Guys, slight problem. DB has his rocket locked onto the monsters, and has to shoot it, or it'll blow him up." Wario said.
"Umm....Okay. Now, we're double-boned." Dmoss said.
"Wait, I have an idea. Get ready to pull Gogeta.......now!" BKS said.
He pulled his arm back, then slammed the monster holding onto Gogeta right in the gut. The monster dropped Gogeta, and they all ran back over to DB.
DevilBottles sighed. "How much time did we have left?" Wario asked.
"You don't wanna know." DB said.
He tightened his grip on the rocket launcher, and peered into the aimer. "You might wanna move back.
All of a sudden, a large roundish shell of metal burst from the barrel. It was in midair for a second, then there was a flash of blinding light, and then BOOM!
When the smoke cleared, there was nothing there but the black of the floor.
"Phew. That was close." Dmoss sighed.
"Thanks for saving me, guys. I thought we were eternally boned back there!" Gogeta said.
"Umm...guys? Couldn't we have just thought of something else, like I said before?" Wario asked.
"NO." The other four said firmly.
Just then, a timer dinged.
"Hello, young friends. It was convenient that as soon as you killed your thoughts, the time was up." Said The Ape.
"Yeah, yeah, blah blah blah. What's the next trial?" BKS asked.
"Well, the Witch was becoming impatient to see the dust that was once your skin and bones lying in front of her," The Ape said, smiling, "So the third trial will be to fight her."
Everyone (except The Ape, again) gasped. "B-But we're n-not ready to face the Rare Witch!" Dmoss cried.
"Too bad." The Ape pounded his scepter again, and the room melted away, turning into the top of the tower.
"BUM, BUM, BUUUUUUUUM!" DB yelled.
"What was that?" BKS asked.
"What? It's dramatic!"
Uh-oh! It's almost final fighty type time, and, as DevilBottles would put it, BUM BUM BUUUUUUM! :D
5th May 2007, 02:23 AM
(-- Chapter Twelve - The Final Fight --)
The Rare Witch cackled as she approached the five heroes, while riding her broomstick, which had been remodeled since its destruction at the hands of Banjo and Kazooie, with jets that defy the laws of space, time, and gravity, and it could talk.
"Now I have you, stupids!" The Witch paused. "Although, in retrospect, I could've just flew down from my castle and zapped you five to little bits of dust."
"Enough talk, Witch!" Dmoss stepped forward. "I'm ready to fight you, and so are my friends, right guys?" He turned to the others.
"Well...umm...you see...uhh...yeah, I guess so." They replied.
"Hold up!" said the Witch, "I want to make this a little interesting."
She clapped her hands together, and suddenly, the castle started rumbling. It began to rise higher into the air, first slow, then at incredibly fast speeds. When it stopped moving, BKSonic looked over the edge.
All he saw were clouds, the castle coming up through them. It was as if the Witch had outstretched the castle, like a wad of taffy.
"This thing was high in the air before!" DevilBottles yelled over the wind. "Now if we fall, we're dead! And we'll hit the ground 5 minutes later!"
"Okay," The Witch nodded, "Now we can battle."
BKSonic grabbed the strap of his backpack, ready to swing it. Dmoss grabbed one of his dynamites. DevilBottles loaded a missle. Gogeta And Wario...umm...got into the SizeCar.
"Ready?" Yelled The Ape. Everyone nodded ready to beat the everliving [CENSORED WORD] out of the Witch. "FIGHT!!!"
The moment that The Ape announced the beggining of battle, the Rare Witch disappeared. "Oh lord." Wario sighed. "Where'd she go?"
A sudden burst of pain shot through Wario's head; he fell on the ground, grasping his neck.
"Wario!" DevilBottles cried. He ran over to Wario. "What happened?"
"I...I dunno." Wario gasped, sitting up, "I was just standing there, and all of a sudden, I felt something pierce my neck. I don't know what it w-OUGGHHHHH!"
He fell over on his face, and DevilBottles gasped as he saw what had pierced Wario's neck. It was a syringe. He had been drugged.
"Dammit," DevilBottles swore, "Guys! The Witch drugged Wario; he's out cold. Keep moving, so she doesn't get you, too!"
BKSonic, Dmoss, Gogeta, and DevilBottles ran the perimeter of the castle roof. After 15 minutes, Gogeta slowed, panting. "M..Maybe she...I dunno, stopped."
"But where is she, then?" Asked BKSonic, also slowing. Just then, the Witch materialized in front of them. BKSonic whacked her in the face with his backpack, causing a bloody nose.
"Wow. You zeroes can actually do something. I guess it's time to reveal my new power." The Witch laughed, and raised her arms in the air. "Prepare to be the sole witnesses to something so prophetic that it hasn't been accomplished in 3 thousand years!"
Suddenly, the whole world around them darkened, the only light being on the castle's roof. All the light that was around them before seemed to be gathering around the Witch. The light got so bright, that soon it was blinding to look at, and the Witch couldn't be seen.
Then, it seemed as if all the light was swirling around them, getting faster and faster, until...until it exploded. Yes. The light exploded.
"Haha! You've never seen light explode, have you?" The Witch could not conceal her grin. "Well, light is never destroyed. It is always there, it just disappears when there is nothing to hold it. But, by making light move at exactly 5 times the speed of light, its molecular structure goes BOOM! The result..." She waved her hand around.
When everyone got a chance to look around, they all (even, gasp, the Ape) gasped. Time had stopped. They could still move around, but everything else was frozen. A bird that had been flying around the castle was stuck in mid-flap. A gust of wind that had been hitting Dmoss' face had stayed at a constant gust. Even Wario, lying on the ground, wasn't moving.
"You see," The Witch cackled, "I am the first being ever in the history of forever to officially freeze time! BWAHAHAHAHA!"
"Okay..." Dmoss said, "But how does that help you defeat us?"
The Witch laughed again. "Simple, idiot. Time is only frozen in this dome around the roof. If I can throw one of you off the roof, you'll look like that bird over there, frozen, but in reality, you'll be falling to your death! For example:" She floated over to The Ape, and grabbed him by his shirt collar.
"M-Master?! What are you doing to me?" The Ape struggled to get free.
"Sorry, you stupid monkey, but you're being too much of a liability. Time to get rid of you!" She readied to toss him over the edge.
"Don't!" BKSonic cried. "You can't throw him to his death just because you don't need him!"
The Witch sighed. "I guess you're right. In fact, I should just unfreeze time, let you capture me, and be taken to the RWP."
DevilBottles turned his head. "Umm...okay, that works. Just come over here..."
"Psyche!" The Witch screamed with laughter, and tossed The Ape over the edge. He screamed with terror, but stopped the moment hit the barrier. To everyone, he was frozen in mid-air, mouth wide open.
"You...You heartless fiend!" BKSonic yelled. "How could you do that?! You'll pay."
17th July 2007, 03:27 AM
(-- Chapter Thirteen - The Final Fight, Part Two --)
The Witch disappeared, again. BKSonic, Dmoss, and Gogeta sighed. The fight had been going on for over an hour since The Ape was thrown out of the tower, and DevilBottles was down, as well. The remaining three were battered, bruised, and tired, and Gogeta was almost down.
"Y...You guys...I can't go on much l...longer..." Gogeta panted.
"Don't worry, buddy," Dmoss said, with a smile. "We'll beat her soon."
Just then, The Witch appeared in front of them, and cackled. She was getting tired, also, and had several noticeable bruises. "Over here!" She yelled, and then disappeared again as BKSonic tried to whack her with his backpack.
Gogeta cried out in pain. He was on the ground, with a deep slash wound in his back.
"Gogeta!" Dmoss and BKSonic cried. "What happened?" They saw The Witch behind him. She had whacked him with her broomstick.
"Well, Gogeta, seeing as you're out of commission," The Witch said, "I guess I can be rid of your services."
"What? What're you talking about, Witch?" BKSonic asked.
She laughed. "You mean you haven't already found out? You idiots, Gogeta's been working for me this whole time! I was going to have him kill you before you even got here, but he wouldn't do it, so I thought I'd just take you out myself."
Dmoss gasped. "Gogeta...is...is that true? Or is it another lie that she's just making up?"
Gogeta panted. "You g-guys...she isn't ly...lying...I was working for the Witch...for awhile, a...anyway. B-But then, I found out that you guys were...much nicer than this stupid Witch...she e...even ordered me to kill you guys...but I wou...wouldn't do it...because you guys are my f...friends."
The Witch sighed. "Wow, Gogeta, that was really cheesy. I mean, even though you're dying." The Witch grabbed Gogeta by the arm, and twirled him around her head, like a rope.
"Dee, we gotta save Gogeta!" BKSonic said.
"B...But he was evil, BKS!" Dmoss said warily.
"So? He was still our friend, and he didn't kill us when he could've. Now come on!" BKSonic ran towards The Witch, and hit her with his backpack. She faltered, but kept on swinging Gogeta.
"I don't even see how that's possible!" Dmoss cried.
"Hmm..." BKSonic thought. "I have an idea! If I put one of those Bananas P.o.t.O gave me into my backpack, maybe it'll be like a...a...Backerang!" He did just so, and threw it at The Witch. It hit her in the face, and she fell off her broom. She also let go of Gogeta, who went flying towards Dmoss (of course), and hit him, thrusting them both into the short wall around the top of the castle.
"Dee! Gogeta!" BKSonic cried. He ran over to them, grabbing his Backpack(erang). They were both knocked out cold.
"See, you stupid little runt?" The Witch laughed. She stood up, with a magical blast powering up in each hand. "You try to save one, and they both get hurt! Now you have no one to help you! Thanks to you, you're facing me alone. I have the power of the Stop 'N' Swop eggs and the Ice Key, and you? You have a backpack! Bwahahahaha!" The Witch fired the green energy at BKSonic.
Wow, update again! And almost a year after I started this fic. But I promise I'll finish it before the end of August. I swear. :D
17th July 2007, 03:33 AM
Close shave, there.
8th August 2007, 05:04 AM
(-- Chapter Fourteen - The Final Fight, Part Three --)
BKSonic's mind raced. There was a green jet of energy rushing toward him, and, for some reason, he couldn't find the strength to move his legs. All he could do is raise his hand, to block his face from the blast...when a blue burst of energy came out of his hand. It flew at The Witch's blast, and they both dissipated.
"Woah!" BKSonic cried. "How'd I do that?" He put his hands out, and two more energy balls appeared. He moved his hands around, aiming the blasts. They hit a wall, melting.
"So you've finally learned to make energy, huh?" The Witch laughed. "Well, it doesn't matter. I'll still kill you, anyway."
BKSonic shot an energy blast at the Witch, which disappeared infront of here face. "How'd you do that?!"
"With my mind, idiot." The Witch said. "I've learned to control the energy with my mind, thanks to the power of the Stop 'N' Swop eggs!"
"Wait..." BKSonic stopped her. "Did you just say 'Stop 'N' Swop eggs'?"
The Witch gasped, then said, "Uh...no, I said... Hop and Drop eggs...heh heh..."
"Ah ha!" BKSonic cried. "So those were the eggs Jim was talking about. Good thing I know the one thing that can destroy the power of the Stop 'N' Swop eggs!"
The Witch cringed. "And what would that be, you twit?"
"A letter of disapproval from Nintendo!" BKSonic replied, pulling an envelope out of his pocket. He gave it to the Witch, who read it out loud:
"Dear Ms. Witch;
We are sorry, but your asking for the ability to do something such as Stop 'N' Swop is too dangerous to your body. We will not be able to use Stop 'N' Swop ever. Ha ha ha.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" The Witch screamed. It looked as though nothing had happened to her.
"So, what happened?" BKSonic asked. The Witch tried to shoot an energy blast, but all that came out was a poof with a fart noise. BKSonic snickered. "Okay, now I can defeat you. But can we get it over with? I need to get some help for my friends." He backed the Witch into a corner, and she hopped up on the ledge. She was readying to jump.
"What're you doing?" BKSonic asked. "All I need to do is take you back to the Rare Witch Project. You don't need to die."
"I'd rather be dead then have to be stuck in some cell in that horrible place! So long, you idiot!" She cackled one last time, and jumped off the tower. Of course, because of the time warp thing, it looked as if she was caught in mid-air.
BKSonic sighed, and grabbed his friends. "Now, how do I get down? Oh yeah, Dee's Pocket PC!" He took Dmoss' PC from his bag, and sent an E-Mail to the RWP. After about 20 minutes, a helicopter suddenly appeared, coming down onto the roof. BanjoSonic was the pilot.
"BKS! You guys are safe!" He said, seeing them.
"Yeah... just get us home. These three are out cold, and I fear Gogeta may be..." BKSonic gulped.
"I get it. I have some medics on the helicopter. Come on, get in." BanjoSonic helped BKSonic carry everyone into the helicopter. "'Ey, BKS, why are those guys frozen in mid-air?"
"T...time warp..." BKSonic yawned. The helicopter took off, flying back to the RWP. To home.
Yeah. That's the ending. I had to end it somehow, didn't I? :D Anyways, there'll be an epilogue at some point in the near future, and then I'm gonna start on my next Fan-Fic. Cheers.
1st September 2007, 02:03 AM
(-- Epilogue --)
"That's the ending?!" Jinjer yelled. It had taken almost all night for BKSonic to tell them the story, and the three children were having trouble staying awake.
"Well, yeah. That's how it happened. An you can't change history." BKSonic told her, yawning.
"But that was stupid!" The Jinjo cried, "The one thing that destroys the eggs was a dumb letter?! Couldn't you have, like, stabbed her repeatedly in the chest, or something?"
"No, I couldn't have." BKSonic sighed. "I just had to beat her easily, like any of you would."
Shades looked up. "But...what happened to your friends?"
"Oh! Well, I'll tell you." BKSonic sat back in his chair. "Dmoss went on to form Real Discussion Village. I'm pretty sure you've been there. A year after the battle, Devil Bottles disappeared without a trace. None of us saw him since. Wario eventually left the Rare Witch Project, and changed his name to Walrus."
"...So you really did all that, BKS?" Glass asked.
"Well, of course!" BKSonic exclaimed. "Why would I lie to you three?"
"Ok, if you really did all that," Jinjer said, "then show us Banjo's Backpack, and the Golden Bananas!"
"Alrighty, then." BKSonic got up and went into another room. He came back with a small wooden chest, with a thick layer of dust on it. He brushed off the dust, and handed the chest to the kids. "Go ahead, open it."
They propped up the top of the chest, and gasped. Inside were Banjo's Backpack, and the Golden Bananas.
"Wow...it even has the patch from when Banjo was fighting Targitzan and the backpack ripped!" Shades said, "This is amazing!"
"Hmm....maybe..." BKSonic thought, "If you kids promise, and I mean promise, not to break the backpack, I'll let you keep it for a few days." He smiled. The kids gasped.
"Y-You're serious?" Glass stammered. BKSonic nodded.
All at once, he was barraged with "THANK YOU!!!!"s and "YOU'RE AWESOME!!!!!"s. "Take it easy, you guys! Now, you should probably get back home." As he said that, a ray of sunshine shone through the window. It was dawn.
"Oh yeah..." said Jinjer. "Thanks a bunch, BKS!" They all ran out the door, completely forgetting the fresh snow that froze their feet. BKSonic stood in the doorway and smiled. After Jinjer was in the Green Jinjo Home, and Glass and Shades were in Bottles' old house, he closed the door.
Woot! See, I said I'd finish it before the end of August. Be looking out for my new fan-fic, coming soon to a Creative Cavern in a Rare Witch Project near you! :D
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