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RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 08:45 AM
Okay,okay, after much consideration, I've decided to tell you the story of my past life... which would be the story of Powisia.
I actually wrote a small book to which I am go to for reference
CH1
My family was of great royalty...
We were worshipped for our greatness...
Me and my brothers had extroardinary powers...
Therefore 7 sages were assigned to all of us to keep our powers intact...
One day I was looking out into the Trojius mountains and thought, "I wonder if I'm gonna be as great as my brother one day..."
Then my maiden,Asalea,said,"Clare,your brother wants to see you."
So I went to my brother,Ted."Clare our dogs just got into a fight and yours is pretty hurt." Our dogs Trojos and Lothos, both very,very large often fought.
I went out to my dog Trojos, and it was very clear, ... he was seriously hurt.
"Ted how dare you let Lothos do that to Trojos!"Then Nick walked in the room. "What's wrong? Did Trojos get hurt badly, AGAIN?"asked Nick .
I went to the main palace room and had some breakfast. I said stroking Trojos," You should never make it a habit of fighting with him, you always end up hurt."
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
16th August 2006, 08:57 AM
i'm your first reader, yay! i look forward to more.
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 09:21 AM
Here's CH2
CH2
While I was at the palace main room my mother and father came in. My mother said to me,"Clare, you better sit down, we are going to do something special for you and your brothers." Then my father said,"It's very important..."
Then my brothers came down and sat in there thrones.I sat in mine also looking at the sages and Trojisians. Then my mother announced," Today we are here to give out the countries to the royal children... The countries in question Waria, Nicos, and Powisia will be now be given to the children by the king of Trojisia."
Then my father stood up and said"Nicos will be given to Nickolai,Waria to Theodore,and Powisia to Clare!" We all sat there smiling as the people cheered. And then we stood up and marched on out.
At the common room I said to my brothers," Were you really expecting this to happen!?We get our own countries, and then we because of that we get to change our royal names!" Ted looking fool blown with excitement of the Trojisians said,"Well it had to happen one day... but yeah I was totally surprised."
Then my mother walked in and said,"There will be a ceremony tonight, and then... you'll be leaving in the morning." She looked sad but was happy for us.
To Be Continued
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 10:34 AM
Here's CH3
CH3
Later that night at the celebration, I noticed something odd... there were talking cats who seemed to be sailors. They said they came from the Isle of Felinia. I was intrigued about their lore. And to my surprise they said they were not far from Powisia. They said they had a small royal family that was very well looked upon. Also the sages were there but they dare not talk to anyone. I then asked one of the cats," What's the prince's name?" "Thomas,"said the cat,"but he really doesn't like Felinia, but it's okay he says." I asked my brother,Nick," Nick I was wanted to ask, what kind of country do you want?" Being a brother he said," I don't know, a good one?"
My parents then made an announcement. " All Trojisians and sailors, the next rulers will now proclaim their royal names! Theodore you first." He said" My name will be Tedoso." Nick said," My name will stay the same, Nickolai."
I walked up nervous and found the courage the courage to say..."My name will be Claw Snuff."
"The Royal Children!" my parents happily said out loud.
The Next Morning
We were all packed and the boats were ready. We said goodbye to Trojis and to our parents tearfully. We boarded the boats and sailed away...
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
16th August 2006, 10:44 AM
wow, talking cats :eek: :eek: :eek: pretty good so far.
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 10:46 AM
Well this a true story except it happened a long long time ago... I truly don't if its truly true but I think it is. Next Ch will be at 2:00 my time so...enjoy what yah have...
Jinjonator
16th August 2006, 11:00 AM
talking cats, really. it's possible that it might be one of those stories combining fact and fiction. cause unless yer posting all this from a computer on Mars, i don't think there's talking cats. :p and if you are from Mars, are the aliens there peaceful?
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 12:31 PM
Um I don't come from different planet this was a long time ago and no one knows what happened to the island.All I know is that in my memories the cats talked so it might been telepathic... And for all I know from the movie signs, aliens are hostile. I think of it now that if cat spoke through th mouth it's face would not really be able to make the correct movements for a sound... Consider it telepathic... :)
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 06:00 PM
Here ya go Ch4
CH4
I looked back watching Trojis grow farther away. I wondered, "What if I can't handle my own country?" "No I can do this..." Then all of a sudden one of the cat sailors walked up to me and said," What's wrong? You look pale." "No. I'm fine, thank you." "Well I have bad news there's a storm near Powisia, so we're going to have to stop at Felinia." "You'll be in the royal palace of Thomas." I nodded my head and said," That's fine"
I was getting bored so I went to talk to a sage.He said," I don't think that what the future holds is good." "What the hell is that supposed to mean! I wanted to have a conversation and you give a weird prophecy?"I yelled at him some more and he said," It means whatever it means," I stormed away half amused, half angry.
I went to sleep at 11:26. In the morning a cat walked up to me and said," We have reached the shores of Felinia. Prince Thomas is waiting for you."
I got up. It was 11:26. I didn't think much of it. I went outside and then I saw a tabby cat in between two guard cats. I walked up to the prince and introduced myself. He said he was very happy to meet me and that it was like a fate of some kind that made us see each other.
I had to admit I was fond of the prince. We had long talks about logic and his people. One of his famous lines was "As is in Egypt." My family was friends with Egypt... but they hated them now and destroyed record of being with the Egyptians.
When it was time to go I said goodbye and gave Thomas a gift. In my goodbye I called him Tommy and said we would meet again soon.
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
16th August 2006, 06:06 PM
i know it's not until next summer, but would you mind if i made a slight spoof of this in Banjo-Fiveie? (involving the cats)
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 06:08 PM
Ummm maybe if you try not kill them because... just don't kill them... because they will come for you... lol
Jinjonator
16th August 2006, 06:10 PM
LOL i won't, i promise. it'll just be about you telepathically communicating with them. it'll be funny. sadly it won't be until next summer, which sucks.
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 06:13 PM
Well at least I have time to write during my school year... but then again it wouldn't be so funny because it'd kind of making fun of it and well just don't make it sound stupid. You can use it though unless I change my mind... which won't happen.
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 06:47 PM
Here you go
Ch5
On the boat to Powisia I began to reminisce about Tommy and what he was doing." Probably big stuff for a prince."
" You like him, don't you."
"No I don't!..."
"Caught you."
" You're right, Yaku, I am in love."
Yaku the spirit then said," You better snap out of it Claw! A princess can't work like that!"
"You're right I shouldn't think about him at all!"
Then we reached Powisia. It was a exotic place with pink shores and a volcano spewing ravished versions of normal animals with spectacularly colored feathers,fur,and eyes.
"Wow, I wasn't expecting it to be so pretty. I only expected it to be a regular island with a few palm trees."
Yaku then said,"You're a ****ing princess! What the hell did you expect! A pile of crap?!"
It took awhile but I got used to being in charge. People were moving in and fighting so I had to create stricter laws...
Then one day a sage's assistant brought news.
"Hell is about to come upon us."
I said,"Yeah I know."
"Really?"
"No.Tell the sage to stop focusing on the horrible and to look for good prophecies."
"Okay, Claw Snuff, I will."
Then one of my assistants came to me and said, "Prince Thomas is here. He would like to see you."
"Ok I'll be right there."I said running towards the front door, which lead to the beach.
I ran to Tommy and hugged him.He said, " I came just to see you."
I smiled and told him, "I missed your logic classes."
We both laughed.
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
16th August 2006, 06:51 PM
"You're a ****ing princess! What the hell did you expect! A pile of crap?!"
LMFAO, i laughed so unbelievably hard.
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 07:38 PM
Well while I'm at it why don't I just write up to CH10 today
Here ya go CH6
CH6
The entire day Tommy and I walked the shores and talked about our countries. Tommy had a lot to tell about a madman parading through town killing everyone, who they eventually caught...
I said, "It's definitely worse here."
Tommy said, "That's impossible, why would it be worse?"
"Because Trojos gets mistreated by the smaller native animals. I really don't like it when that happens to Trojos."
"Oh, okay. I see what you're saying."
But as we went back to the palace, a sage's assistant said,
"He says that a horrid future awaits us."
I said to the sage, "As long as I'm here, that will never happen. Tell him that."
Okay, Claw Snuff, I won't let you down."
Then as we were walking, I said to Tommy, "What does your future sound like?"
"Eternal Happiness. Yours?"
"That sage's hell crap."
At the end of the week, when Tommy was leaving, we said our goodbyes, and I hugged him.
I said, "I hope you have a better future than me..."
He replied with a smile, "I hope you do too."
Then as he was boarding the boat, I yelled to him,
"I love you!!!"
"What the **** did you just do. You're a ****ing idiot you know that? He doesn't even like you!"
"How do you know, Yaku? I'm pretty sure he likes me."
"Well I'm pretty sure he doesn't like you, I think it's a scam."
"We'll just have to see won't we, Yaku?"
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
16th August 2006, 07:46 PM
so much swearing LOL. am i the crazy guy killing everyone? :p
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 07:57 PM
yeah i was sort of in a way referring to you but he did talk about a madman killing people which spooked me so I said that it was worse here than there. At first that wasn't referring to you then I realized it did it was sort of an accident but it is funny.
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 08:00 PM
Are you wondering about the bad prophecies or Yaku's meaness... that will be explained much, much later. Don't get scared about Claw Snuff liking a cat prince.
Jinjonator
16th August 2006, 08:14 PM
holy cow, he's a cat? Is this him by any chance? (http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/622/molliepd8.jpg)
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 08:30 PM
Here you go CH7
CH7
About a month later I sent Tommy a letter to him inviting him back to Powisia.
As soon as the letter was given to him he rushed back.
When he arrived at the beach he hugged me. We talked and I wanted to explain something very serious to him. He wanted to hear it right there, but I told him it was safer in the palace.
When we got inside the palace, I hysterically said,
"Someone has a plot to kill me... I don't know who but I'm not safe anymore! I'm gonna have to go back Trojis. But then they also found that after I was dead they would destroy everything: Trojis, Waria, Nicos, and Felinia.
Tommy help me find them."
"Don't worry Clare we will find the plotters and get rid of them. Trust me on this."
"Okay, I will, but someone inside has done this, and this is basically all we know. I could be killed anytime or anywhere."
"Tommy, tell me if you find anything."
"I will. Don't worry about it. Stay calm, everything will be alright."
To Be Continued
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 08:42 PM
No Jinjonator he black and white tabby you'd only be able to find him in New York.
RareCareBear
16th August 2006, 09:10 PM
Okay that's enough writing for today... enjoy what I wrote people! :)
RareCareBear
17th August 2006, 09:21 PM
here's ch8 DONT READ UNLESS YOU READ ALL THE CHAPTERS LEADING UP!
if you're a new reader read from the beginning....of the story
CH8
I sat in safety as all my guards surrounded me. I was scared to death. No one had done something this bad before. "Trojos, no need to be so scared." I said to Trojos who was whimpering in a corner.
Then all of a sudden one of my guards walked in and said,
"We found the plotters."
I stood up and said,"Who are they?"
"A group of teenagers."
"Oh really?Tell Tommy to bring them back to Trojisia."
"Okay, Miss."
"Tommy she requests that you take the plotters back to Trojis."
"I will."
When the guard was gone, he told his assistant, "Get an executioner. NOW!"
"Yes, Prince Thomas."
Back at the Palace the guard said to me, "He's bringing them back to Trojisia."
"Okay, please let me know how old are you?"
" Currently we're all ten year-olds. We all know you're eight."
I am going to put out a magical law, that no one can age over fifteen."
"What about adults?"
"They either move or get put in jail."
Meanwhile the plotters were being executed.
Tommy said to them," I know you didn't do it.But who cares? I'm the one who did it. But they don't know that. None do. And there are a lot more people involved then you'd ever imagine."
"You ****ing bastard we love the princess."
"Kill them all.Now!"
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
18th August 2006, 12:35 AM
awesome, killing, swearing, and killing.
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 01:16 AM
Well, isnt't it nice to know that Tommy has a plot to kill me? :p
Jinjonator
18th August 2006, 01:18 AM
yep :p it's also nice to know he killed innocent people, i laughed.
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 01:36 AM
Ch 9 it tis'
CH9
I sat down reading a book when Tommy came in...
"Clare I need to talk to you..."
"What is it?"
"Your brother, Ted, is someone else in the plot to kill you."
"Ted, no way, it can't be true."
"It's true."
Then all of a sudden, Warian boats appeared in the distance. I trapped them and had me and my army assemble.
" We have to invade Waria for my life's sake."
"Yes, Claw!"
"Make sure you're ready for extreme cold."
"Yes, Claw!"
We set out to Waria with 10,000 soldier children.
Meanwhile, Tommy, stood on the shores, saying,
"The plan is set."
"Hello, Tommy, I'm here to see Claw, is she here?"
"No and she won't be for much longer, either."
Nicolai stood their angry and confused.
"What the **** are you talking about."said Nicolai angry as ever.
"Oh, its just a plot to kill her, that's all."
"You evil little kitten!"
Tommy drove a special knife right into Nicolai.
"Make that one powerful and evil kitten."said Tommy.
Tommy threw Nicolai into the water not knowing about a special sage that was there.
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
18th August 2006, 01:47 AM
So he's an evil kitty? I think I found him. (http://pictureserver.funnyjunk.com/pics2/superangrykitty.jpg)
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 01:52 AM
That's looks like him but you can see a music video of him from Ni-ki-oh Ni-Ki-Oh UNTITLED (http://youtube.com/watch?v=esuCZCEXaX8)
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 02:51 AM
Damn now that song "The Nameless" is stuck in my head and somehow it seems related to the mod thing... ???
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 03:31 AM
Wait... I just remembered I got an Action Replay... read my newest CH 9
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 03:33 AM
Now Ni-ki-oh untitled is causing me to have to make Prince Dittonian 3
BrothersBear
18th August 2006, 03:53 AM
RareCareBear, I really love this story! You absolutely must post these chapters in my forums!
http://www.crackedeggstudios.com
We should talk about turning this into a movie or a video game ^_^
BrothersBear
18th August 2006, 03:57 AM
Also RareCareBear, as a Moderator, I have a duty to warn you not to quadruple post again in the future. Thanks.
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 04:05 AM
Okay Tedoso, but I'm a Moderator too. You might want to post in that lobby section that you are new one day :)
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 07:49 AM
Here ya go CH10
CH10
A lot of tears came flowing through my eyes as the ship neared super cold Waria. "How could it be my brother?It's impossible."
"Nothing is impossible. Claw, I'm pretty sure I told you that."
"I just can't believe it could be my brother."
"Miss, we shall be there in five minutes. All the troops are ready to head into the mountains."
"Okay, I'll be out on the deck in five."
"Claw, just know that whatever the truth is, it will be soon found out."
As I walked out onto the deck in heavy armor covered over by a large fur coat, I smiled. I smiled because I would get to actually see Tedoso after 2 years.
"Troops, to the mountains!"
"Yes Claw!"
Back at Powisia
Then all of a sudden Nicolai's body was snatched down into the depths.
Hours later, Nicolai woke up to a unfamiliar voice.
"Hello."
Nick in fear said,"Who are you?!"
"I am Nimue. The "anti-sage". I heal the people that we pray for when all hope is lost."
"Why am I here?"
"You were killed by Prince Thomas. He isn't even a prince though. The real Prince is called Dittonian. The princess is called Celebi, and the other prince is Iggly."
"Oh my God. I hope Clare is prepared."
"Don't worry, Tommy can not reach where she is currently."
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
18th August 2006, 08:06 AM
The princess is called Celebi,
holy cow, that's a pokemon! :eek: pretty sweet so far.
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 08:16 AM
Ok BrothersBear I posted them. I will post my full book trying to sort out the memories on the http://crackedeggstudios.com/ forum soon. Well yeah course it's a Pokemon I don't know what her past name was but currently it's Celebi/Serebii. Dittonian for short is Ditto.
BrothersBear
18th August 2006, 08:18 AM
If I were a young warthog, I would say thanks. More Celbos for you!
By "trying to sort out the memories" and "I don't know what her past name was but currently" I am assuming you forgot where the original book you wrote is and you are trying to write this fanfic from memory... Don't worry about it if it comes out different. Play it off like "Yeah, Celebi's definitely her name. And since this princess is thousands of years old in a timeless kingdom, that's actually where the Pokemon derives from."
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 08:25 AM
*Takes Bag of Celbos* BrothersBear what else do you Celbos for other than downloads? At one point we had a little forum shop but I have no idea what happened to it... About that the book is so short only the beginning has references to the beginning chapters of the story. and I'm not sure if it's a fanfic... just because you're a fan doesn't mean it's a fanfic... I'd call it a ... fantru. Celebi/Serebii is her pet name.
BrothersBear
18th August 2006, 08:26 AM
Yes, her "pet" name. Because if I recall correctly when I read the original manuscript, this "Celebi" was lovers with Tedoso.
RareCareBear
18th August 2006, 08:28 AM
Ted how dare you leak story information! *GivesTedawackonthehead*
BrothersBear
18th August 2006, 08:30 AM
Well, I'm sorry about that, but by explaining yourself in between chapters, you risk doing the same on your own. You don't need to justify your Creative Corner masterpiece.
EDIT
I mean the Creative Cavern.
RareCareBear
19th August 2006, 12:47 AM
Here is Ch11.
CH11
Nicolai confused at the word "anti-sage" goes to kill Nimue with his sword, but Nimue dissappeared in a puff of smoke before he even gets to touch her.
Meanwhile I was climbing the mountains with my men. I looked up surprised to see a gigantic dog. It was Lothos. Much bigger than before, he had icicle teeth and nails. After awhile I had lost 3,000 men to the dog. When I was about to get hit by one of the dog's paws, Trojos came to the rescue and pushed Lothos on to his side. A huge fight broke out. After awhile the fight somehow ended in happiness. The dogs were having fun enjoying the view. I thought that it had to do with something.
Meanwhile, at the shores of Powisia, Tommy stood there talking to himself. "You know, Tommy, I think you actually like this girl!"
"That's not true!"
"Of course it's true. And because of that..."
"What are you going to do now!"
"Banish you to the depths."
"Oh, ****."
"Yesa ar tous shifo to coures tia tare asheste tomike Claw habiku."
"What are you doing!" One of Tommy's spirits vanishes.
"Now I'm in control."
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
19th August 2006, 06:27 AM
wow, being banished to the depths for liking someone. funny.
RareCareBear
19th August 2006, 07:42 AM
It's not that funny if you think about it get's in the way of the murder plot.
RareCareBear
24th August 2006, 12:56 AM
CH12
I marched up the mountain with my troops. We could see the palace in the distance. I cried a bit and yelled out "Ted, why did you start this?"
Meanwhile at Tedoso's palace.
Serebii calmly said " You know we still have some work to do."
Tedoso sat there confused.
"You have to make up with Thomas. He is angry and unstable. He calls himself the prince Astea. Should we trust him?"
"I'm not sure." Tedoso said nervously.
"I have to go back to Felinia. Dittonian requests my presence. He says something happened when we were off in Egypt."
"Okay you can go."
*Serebii fades away.*
When Serebii got back to Felinia the cats were not loyal.
"What is with you cats? We're the royalty here! Not any strangers!" Serebii said frustrated.
Dittonian asked "Who is the prince now?"
The crowd grew more angry and Serebii, Dittonian, and the other royal cats fled to Egypt.
Meanwhile at Waria we were knocking guards unconsious in the courtyard. We saw the palace gates and ran to them.
To Be Continued
Now this is where you come in. Ask me if you want your name in the story and I will add you in.
RareCareBear
25th August 2006, 11:28 PM
CH13
We rammed the gates open. And I ran towards my brother. I asked him,
"Why are you doing this?"
"Doing what?" my brother asked back.
"Trying to kill me!"
My brother sat there confused.
Meanwhile Tommy was at Powisia.
"Sailors,"
"What?"
"Get prepared for the wedding."
"Wedding?"
"Yes, a wedding"
Nicolai was unconsious, lying in the snow. He woke up not remembering anything at all. Wild dogs were across a bridge waiting for him to cross.
"Where am I? All I remember is playing Super Smash Bros. Melee and then... I'm here."
As of that moment I was on my boat heading back to Powisia. My soldiers were coaxing me as I sat there unsure of my future.
To Be Continued
Jinjonator
25th August 2006, 11:36 PM
put me in!!! also, i was under the impression this story took place a LONG time ago. super smash bros. melee???
RareCareBear
26th August 2006, 12:33 AM
That has to do with time warps
that is in the future but it took place in the past. PM BrothersBear about it.
RareCareBear
28th August 2006, 06:03 AM
CH14
I am sitting at my throne, crying.
"What the hell am I supposed to do!"
One of my soldiers assured me,"Nothing. Just stay where you are and trust no one."
A mad man runs in screaming jibberish.
"Guards! Sedate him!"
"What's your name?"
"Jinjonator."
"What do you want from me? Riches, food, advice?"
"The wind sage, Drelaf, says that death is creeping upon our land."
"Is that all he ever says, Jinjonator?"
"Possibly. But it's because it's the truth."
"You are dismissed."
A soldier then walked up to me and said,
"Prince Thomas would like to see you in private."
I hesitated, but asked, "Where is he?"
"At the base of the volcano."
My guards marched me over, and then left us alone.
" I asked you here, because of something special..."
I stood there still scared for my life, because I was all alone with him in the jungle.
"Will you marry me, Claw Snuff."
"I don't know right now."
"But, we're seriously in love. Why not?"
"No!"
Tommy stood there defeated.
"I will not marry you. Guards!"
"But, Claw!"
"I'm sorry, I'm not ready for that commitment yet."
I went to sleep that night at 11:26.
To Be Continued
RareCareBear
28th August 2006, 11:24 PM
CH15
Chapter 15 Remembering
“Clare, you are the ruler of Powisia, the true heir of the island is your family. Claim this land; it is a small island. Here you and kids will rule forever.” A hooded darkness explained. I turned to look at the lush land. “But, if this belongs to me and my family, why don’t we live here?” I asked. “This land was separated from reality once Marco Polo set out to find it. You, Clare were the ruler back then… but the land is horribly frozen in time. You, Clare were in places making trades, and after a while you forgot about the island and started a family. It was swallowed by darkness,” claimed the mystery person. “What was my name?” I hurriedly asked. Then pointing his hand to the sky, he said, “Your name was Claw Snuff, goddess of Powisia! And Tommy is your husband and god of Powisia.”
Suddenly I woke up at the exact time I fell asleep: it was 11:26 a.m. I said to myself “What a weird dream. What happened? I thought I was in that land for hours!”
I went out to the kitchen and yawned as if I were tired. I went to the living room and forced myself onto the couch.
Then I turned on the TV and watched Animal Planet. All the animals could not keep my mind from Powisia. How could somebody just permanently forget everything? Ruler of a country and you forget your husband, friends? Forget about the entire island forever, did I really do that? Truly impossible. I’m sure it was impossible to go back.
“Mom, do you believe in reincarnations?” I asked my mom. She said, “I’m sure it’s possible but I really don’t know because I’ve never found out about it.” Just after that a whole bunch of clouds covered the sky creating a sense of shade and darkness. Then I said, “ Okay, I guess.” I began to think of the kids on that island frozen in time. I immediately got up and exclaimed, “I gotta save them all!” My mom then said confused, “Huh? What did you say?” Then in a excuse voice I said “Nothing mom.”
To Be Continued
RareCareBear
29th August 2006, 12:01 AM
CH 16 The Coming of Tommy
One night, it was the finale of the first season of American Idol. I was sitting on my yard's front steps when a black and white tabby kitten walked up to me...
It was the cat that waits for it's mother which never comes home. Filled with grief, I took him inside. When I told my mother she let me keep him.
"I shall name you Tommy."
I don't know why I insisted on that name.
I quickly fell in love with the cat, and one day I thought I asked me this:
"Will you marry me, Claw?"
I replied, "Yes, Tommy, I will."
(I had that conversation on film but it has been taped over.)
Over the year we were inseparable. I never knew how much I was connected to the cat until I remembered the dream. I still loved him no matter how we were connected. I showed my friend Erin a picture of him, and she thought I should put it on the pictures of pets bulletin board. I showed it to Scott and he thought Tommy was cute.
No matter what... I still remember what he said to me.
"We will go back, Claw. We will."
To Be Continued
RareCareBear
3rd September 2006, 02:33 PM
Chapter 17 Kingdom Hearts and The Hooded Darkness
It was the year 2003. I was 8 years old. I can't say exactly how many memories came to me because of this game. But there were at least 100, and each of them in the language of the past. Each one has embedded itself in my mind. Each one seems so... sad. I can remember the suicides of the sages. I cry every night because the memories won't leave. None of my friends understand except Erin, (Neir) who was a sage herself.
I will tell you how the sages all committed suicide:
Tocts (Scott): Jumped off a cliff into the water.
Drelaf (Albert):Hung himself.
Twathme (Matthew): Froze to death
Neir (Erin): Stabbed herself when she couldn't find me in the morning.
The Hooded Darkness, which was from my first dream was before Kingdom Hearts was released. The Hooded Darkness looks a lot like a nobody. This is strange since I had the dream before even hearing about KH2. However in a year or so after about 60 dreams the Hooded Darkness wasn't just a black trench coat anymore. It became yellow with orange designs. This confused me a couple of times when it visited me. It only can visit on the days that I have the memories. But even then, it rarely shows up for the occasion.
Kingdom Hearts 2 brought up at least a few memories of mine. Not as many as the first one. However when I went to sleep at 11:26 and woke up in 2003 at 11:26... That could be considered birth by sleep.
This is mentally painful writing this, so I'll stop for today. I am scooping to far into my memories. And please don't ask me about this. It hurts enough just to write about the suicides.
RareCareBear
28th September 2006, 09:35 PM
This story isn't over just yet.
Chapter 18: The Coming of Lucifer
1 year after the dissapearance of Tommy.
Matthew and I sat there with our cauldron filled with hot water and herbs. Nicky was walking up to us, with a smile on his face. Today was the day we would get our powers. We walked out to a field and looked at the sky.
"Beautiful day, isn't it Matthew?" I said to Matthew. Ashley, Matthew, Nicky, and I joined hands forming a circle, and repeated,
"Lucifer, prince of devils, come for us."
We closed our eyes, and when we opened them we saw a black cat sitting there.
"You called, and I listened."
We bowed before him.
"Children, you do not have to bow in front of me."
"We wish to work for you, Satan." said Nicky, seemingly unafraid.
"I know, but first I must mark you as my own."
The black cat lifting his paw and slashed at our arms.
"The first thing I need you children today, is to release one of our own from the clutches of another person. Her name is Heather."
"Where might we find this other witch of yours?" I asked, determined.
"She is in Edgewater currently, but not for long." The black cat said with a worried look.
"Do we get a reward of some kind?" Matthew asked greedily.
"You get what your heart desires most, which is very generous of me." The black cat smiled and faded away.
I thought that he must know of Powisia, it's as if that what he was implying when he said what the reward was. But what if it was a trap? Why would the Devil pull me into a trap? But then, I remembered...
"Oh my god, that's the reason I didn't marry Tommy. He wanted to kill me... but that's not all of it, there was something else... I didn't die either... I fled to Egypt, where the priests and priestesses encased me in stone! They released me 50 years later while being invaded by the Assyrians..." The words escaped from my mouth while we were sitting under the willow tree we called "Dead Man's Hand"
"So, you're basically saying that not only did Tommy want to kill you, but he was part of an even bigger plot?" Matthew asked, perplexed.
"That's exactly what I mean, but what was this plot, and who formed it?" I said, as perplexed as Matthew.
"28 sages, four islands, four sources of power in our world... but what how was our death anything important to others? What did someone gain by killing children?" Nicky asked childishly, trying to cheer me up, because he was speaking in broken Trojisian with the Powisian dialect.
"Nick, I'm not sure of anything anymore. All we have to do is wait and see." I said, getting up to walk to the beach.
To Be Continued ^_^
RareCareBear
12th November 2006, 02:51 PM
Chapter 19: Time to Die
Matthew and I paced through the dark alley at 2:30 am. We both loved the night, it was just so cool. You're one of the few awake, and your parents are asleep, so you can run wild.
"Matt... I think I see someone coming..." I whispered to Matthew
"I see nothing, maybe you're just tired." Matthew said while shoving Sour Patch Kids into his mouth.
"TIME TO DIE!" A voice screeched through the air.
"What the **** was that?!" I screamed, running out of the alley....
"I don't know but we better get the **** outta here." Matthew chased after me.
We ran up to the Grocery Store and sat down against the cold wall and proceeded to tell ghost stories, to see anything matched what we just experienced. We failed to classify the occurance.
"Matt, do ya wanna get some beef jerky at the Shell Station? It'll keep us going all night." I asked Matthew with big, hungry eyes.
"Yeah, let's go. I need to get something in my stomach, it's been complaining all ****ing night." Matt said as he got up falteringly.
We went off to the Shell Station and bought to big bags of beef jerky. I took the biggest piece and ate it without hesitation.
"Clare, how the **** did you eat it so fast?" Matt was amazed.
"Beef jerky is delicious, so I just like to eat it. I don't know how I eat it so fast though."
To Be Continued ^_^
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