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Old 1st September 2007, 03:00 AM
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Someone Just For Me

I guess this time I should give you a little background. Basically I live in Il. this girl I like lives in Ca. We've only ever really had an on-line relationship, but we fell in love anyway. This one day I was reading Chobits and there's this story in it, and the person is looking for that "someone just for me" I kind of like the story, so I wrote this which is somewhat the same style. I guess the only real problem is that I've never actually shown it to her though.

There is no place I can be happy,
only she can bring me happiness.
She is someone just for me.
Being with her is like living a beautiful dream,
A beautiful dream that no one wants to wake from.
However, an ocean of land separates us.
Living on two different sides of the same place.
I cannot be with that someone just for me.

I imagine her embrace, but it is not the embrace of a mother,
but of someone who loves me without asking anything in exchange.
She creates a bridge over the dark crevice that separates us,
one that lets me feel her touch, her hair blowing in the wind,
blowing with the ease of someone that is truly innocent.
Where innocence is the gentle kiss that we share.

I lie awake at night, wondering when she will invite me back again.
The someone just for me, someone whose love for me is true.
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Old 1st September 2007, 04:17 PM
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These are just as good as your other 2 threads. One word, Amazing
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Old 1st September 2007, 07:33 PM
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Thanks, I found a few more, maybe later tonight I'll show you guys another.
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