My Poetry

[Deebs]

More to come :3

In Eternal Winter:

Tonight i face eternal winter
The fog, thick as ice surrounds me
Tonight, my soul is a blur
My thoughts are a frozen sea

In Eternal Winter, the truth lies
In Eternal Winter, your life dies

The path is lost to the twilight
I can do nothing but stare
My thoughts are lost in the night
And in one final nightmare

In Eternal Winter, your life is rare
In Eternal Winter, just one final nightmare

In Eternal Winter, you taste the frost
In Eternal Winter, your soul is lost

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Fate:
The inequity of fate
The line between love and hate
One day, it's on your side
One day, your luck is gone

One day, you laugh and you smile
One day, you bleed, in denial
One day, "What could go wrong?"
One day, Your hope is gone.

One day, You feel so tall
One day, all you do, is fall
One day, nothing scares you, fate is kind
One day, fear grips your mind

Through a spiral of words, hate, fear
No ladder to climb on. Your stuck here.

For eternity.
Until fate feels kind.
Until fate changes it's mind.

One day,
Eternity.

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(This one is quite emotional, but difficult to understand in parts)
One Last Goodbye:

Oh, how i need you
Oh, how i grieve now your gone
In my dreams, i see you
I awake so alone.

I said one last goodbye
But i never knew it would be my last
How would i have known you'd die?
But somehow, i knew

And i grieve
Oh how i grieve
I'm one lonely man
With one lonesome tear

In my dreams, i can see you
I can hear you
I can hold you
And when i awake, you fade away

I don't want to wake
I don't want to be alone
Why did you leave me?
Why?

My dreams haunt me
My loneliness haunts me, you i crave
If i can see you,
Haunt me to my grave

Who to blame?
I should have said it
Shouted it
Screamed it
Carved it into stone
That one last goodbye

I still feel the pain
I still feel the hate
The hate for myself

I should have said, before death did us part
One final goodbye, where you broke my heart

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One Lonesome Tree (Wrote when drunk, NO idea what it means...)

A lone wind, chill to the bone
A white landscape, a black reality
Where i wander, alone
Nothing but one lonesome tree

The outlook, bleak. Nothing but mist
Even my shadow has forsaken me
It's not as if i will be missed
Just this one lonesome tree

I cannot walk, i cannot feel
I stand in the bitter monotony
I cannot believe this is real

But one half year later
The white is green
The wind is laughter
And one dead tree.

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The Wind Enigma:

Beneath an open sky
Arms stretched out, crucified
A wind drifts by
On this wind i will ride

Carried away into the clouds
Carried by this untamed force
It consumes me like a shroud
Forcing me to run it's course

Miles away into the deep wilderness
Of the sky, Carried by enigma's kiss
This day i drift into heavens nest
I feel the cold crisp airs bliss

I drifted into darkness, as if a ride
I find myself in the fields

Arms stretched out, crucified
Crucified to the crisp air
On this wind i will ride
And it's course i shall bear

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Tomorrow:
Tomorrow, how i loathe you
As much as i loathe today
Don't come near me
I've never feared you,
But i do today

I was happy yesterday
But if you were to ask
What was good about yesterday
I wouldn't be able to answer you
Was i happy all along?

I fear you, tomorrow,
I fear you being as bad as today
My happiness, low
This is a game, i don't want to play

I never want time to go by
I'm afraid of change, i fear
The next sunrise, i'd rather die
How i wish i could disappear

How i wish i could fade away
How i just want yesterday

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Ice and Fire:

Feel the cold crispness in a winter night
Feel the heat of the suns glory and might
See the snow, falling into the meadow
See the light, shining on the winds that blow
Embrace the cold reality of frost
Embrace the fire and the cold that is lost
Be the ice, and freeze your soul in coldness
Be the fire, and burn your soul in darkness

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The Flames of War:

Tonight, i draw my blade in war
My flames shall scorch your heathen soul
Your time in reign has now died
I shall not now stand aside

Tonight, my blade will flow with your blood
And I will fight until i die
Tonight is not the night I fall
Not tonight, will I grace Valhalla's hall.

My fire shall soon be a storm
Burning all in my path to victory
You shall lay, dead, scorched, and burned
The tide of the gods has now turned.

The moon will illuminate my flame
The flame used to win this battle
Once you lay dead, i shall be free
And my flame will burn on for eternity.

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Icy Winter Of My Soul

The cruelest wind reflects me
Just the frozen winter sea
No break in the cloudy sky
You will freeze, then you will die

Life is bleak, the land is white
Frost thaws with all of it's might
No break in the cloudy sky
You will freeze, then you will die

The coldest force of nature
The fog and snow are a blur
No break in the cloudy sky
You will freeze, then you will die

This is where i'm bound to fall
Where i have one final crawl
No break in the cloudy sky
I will freeze, then I will die

[dragon_kazoooie]

That was depressing...good....but depressing ^^

[treeckoman]

DRAGONBOTTLES + poetry = COOL deppressingness

[Deebs]

Depressing? Theres only one depressing poem there!

[dragon_kazoooie]

I'm sorry dude but all of them made me feel kinda sad....good work ^^

[Deebs]

Originally Posted by dragon_kazoooie

I'm sorry dude but all of them made me feel kinda sad....good work ^^

My poetry tapped into someone emoticons.... =')

[StarFox]

Originally Posted by DragonBottles

My poetry tapped into someone emoticons.... =')

I liked 'em too. I was instantly thinking of dark ambiance that would go well if these were spoken in song. Sounds awesome as hell in my head, I loved reading it.

Also, lol. Tapped into your emoticons. Awesome, dude. Just awesome wording there.

[Deebs]

Originally Posted by starfox260

I liked 'em too. I was instantly thinking of dark ambiance that would go well if these were spoken in song. Sounds awesome as hell in my head, I loved reading it.

Also, lol. Tapped into your emoticons. Awesome, dude. Just awesome wording there.

Lol, internet emotions ftw XD

I'm glad you like it

[dragon_kazoooie]

told you that you wouldn't get criticized in a bad way ^^

[Mr 3vil]

Make sure to correct the grammar.

I read halfway and thought it was too depressing for my liking.

[Grimmjow]

I liked them

and lol @ the one written when you were drunk XD

[Deebs]

Originally Posted by Grimmjow

I liked them

and lol @ the one written when you were drunk XD

I love drunken ones :3

[Deebs]

Lovers Grief (I've written this on a song basis, and i've written the song too)

I see you,
When all life is lost
All hope is gone

I love you
But nothing will change
Whats already done

In meadows of heaven,
You dance in the grass
That final kiss
Oh, why was it the last?
My heart is broken,
But when i rot
I will get back
What i hate to have lost


I see you,
In my broken dreams
Or so it seems

I love you
You're so far away,
Why can't i stay (With you)

Theres nothing left for me
In this impure life
I'd rather pass on
Away from this strife
It's impossible to bear
Being away from my heart
You stole it from me
When we did part.

[Kain Horward]

Those are really good!

[Deebs]

Originally Posted by Kain Horward

Those are really good!

If you said it, it must be true