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Old 27th May 2010, 07:02 PM
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"An unusual inconvenience..."

A story made by me.

Chapter 1: How it all started.

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Old 27th May 2010, 07:03 PM
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"Jake..."
"Jake wake up..."
"You're going to be late for school!"

Jake returned to conscienseness.

-...What... He replied, so tired he had no idea what was going on.

- Why are you even still in bed! Weren't you suppose to be in school like, 20 minutes ago?! His mom said, a bit angry, but still understanding that Jake simply just forgot to set the alarm.

- No mom, today we were suppose to visit the museum of ancient art... He replied, realizing how stupid he had been, forgetting to set the alarm the night before.

- How is that better!

His mom was less understanding now, her gentleness had turned into rage.

- Well, I missed the bus, I guess there's no point in going. Jake said, hoping for the best.

- Oh, you're going! His mom replied.

- But come on! I don't know how to get there! He said, still hoping that his mom would spare him the visit.

- So call one of you're friends, or the teacher, they'll help you get there. She said.

- Mom, my phone is broken, I told you this yesterday, you always forget these things! He was a bit irritated at his mother, but he realized he couldn't complain seeing as he did actually break his phone.

- Whatever, you're going to that museum, you're 14 years old, you can't afford to miss these things.

- Mom, it's a vistit to an art museum, how important could it be?

Jake knew it was no use, whatever he'd say, he'd had to go. He turned on his computor to check the bus paths, quickly made himself a sandwich for breakfast, which he ate on the way to the bus station, and proceeded to wait for the bus. It took unusually long for the bus to come, but Jake didn't care. The more time he had to wait for the bus, the less time he had to spend learning about old paintings made by people he knew nothing about. He thought about why he didn't just skip the whole thing, I mean, his mom wasn't still watching him, but he figured that if he didn't show up his mom would find out. The bus finally approached, and pulled in the breaks closer to the pavement than it usually does. He enters the bus, showing his buspass, and quickly grabs a seat before the whole bus is swarmed by people who need to get to work. After 20 boring minutes, of nothing but listening to music and playing terrible iPod games, the bus finally closed up on the station. He walked off the bus, knowing he was only about 5 minutes away from the museum. As he approached the museum, he realized he didn't bring any money for entrance. Normally, the class account would pay for this kind of things, but he wasn't there with the class that time, so he was in a pickle. He came up with this little speach in his head, convincing the person at the entrance trading money for tickets that he was with the class that came in earlier, and that he should get in for free. He didn't know what that job was called, he wasn't very educated in that area, but he didn't care, seeing as he found it a completely unnecessary thing to know things about. As he came up to the museum, he was a bit nervous, imagining in his head that that the chat with the person would turn into debate or something else he'd seen on TV. But it didn't. When he entered, there was no woman there. He walked around a bit looking for his classmates, or someone in the staff to ask if they've seen a class somewhere, but he couldn't find anyone. He couldn't see or hear anyone in that entire museum. He yelled: "HELLO???". No answer. He was on his way out when a S.W.A.T team ran through the entrance. Most of them ran past Jake, but one of them stopped and said:

- What the hell are you doing here kid?!

- What... What's going on?! He replied.

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Old 27th May 2010, 08:14 PM
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Jake knew it was no use, whatever he'd say, he'd had to go. He turned on his computor to check the bus paths, quickly made himself a sandwich for breakfast, which he ate on the way to the bus station, and proceeded to wait for the bus. It took unusually long for the bus to come, but Jake didn't care. The more time he had to wait for the bus, the less time he had to spend learning about old paintings made by people he knew nothing about. He thought about why he didn't just skip the whole thing, I mean, his mom wasn't still watching him, but he figured that if he didn't show up his mom would find out. The bus finally approached, and pulled in the breaks closer to the pavement than it usually does. He enters the bus, showing his buspass, and quickly grabs a seat before the whole bus is swarmed by people who need to get to work. After 20 boring minutes, of nothing but listening to music and playing terrible iPod games, the bus finally closed up on the station. He walked off the bus, knowing he was only about 5 minutes away from the museum. As he approached the museum, he realized he didn't bring any money for entrance. Normally, the class account would pay for this kind of things, but he wasn't there with the class that time, so he was in a pickle. He came up with this little speach in his head, convincing the person at the entrance trading money for tickets that he was with the class that came in earlier, and that he should get in for free. He didn't know what that job was called, he wasn't very educated in that area, but he didn't care, seeing as he found it a completely unnecessary thing to know things about. As he came up to the museum, he was a bit nervous, imagining in his head that that the chat with the person would turn into debate or something else he'd seen on TV. But it didn't. When he entered, there was no woman there. He walked around a bit looking for his classmates, or someone in the staff to ask if they've seen a class somewhere, but he couldn't find anyone. He couldn't see or hear anyone in that entire museum. He yelled: "HELLO???". No answer. He was on his way out when a S.W.A.T team ran through the entrance. Most of them ran past Jake, but one of them stopped and said:
No way in hell... I will never read that. It's a bunch of crap.
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Old 27th May 2010, 08:32 PM
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No way in hell... I will never read that. It's a bunch of crap.
Wait, did you read part of it and decided to not continue or did you not read any of it and decided to not do so just because it is a bit long?
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Old 27th May 2010, 11:44 PM
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Did he just go on the Magic School Bus?
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this is great!
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